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Maximum Security

Maximum Security

Sitting in maximum security,
I saw from across a steel table
The yearning for freedom in a murderer's eyes.
I saw the lack of sunshine across his pale face.
When I scanned him for traces of remorse,
All I could see were tears.

I saw tears for the wife he would never have,
For the child he would never create,
And for the potential within him that was set aflame.
I saw him eat his food, and talk about the weather
As if it mattered.

I saw the shadowy bags under his eyes
That spoke of a tortured soul
And sleepless nights that were haunted by the memory 
Of a beautiful world.
His rest was fitful,
Plagued by the reality that he would never see a sunset again
Until his youthful hair was grey.

I saw him brandishing a swollen hand,
Preparing himself for yet another threat of violence.
Sometimes he won, sometimes he lost.
He had no care for self preservation.
His knuckles were his liason,
His anger held the promise that he would live to fight again.
And again.

I saw him writing letters daily,
Pouring his soul into every line,
And delicately maneuvering his pencil,
Breathing life into every word.
Four pages for every stamp,
Two stamps for every week.

I saw his eyes light up when the mail came.
He smiled in antincipation, for words from someone who loved him,
But every letter was stamped with the same red words:
Return to sender.

Written by: Kyle Ezra Kriticos

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  1. Date: 11/10/2012 6:31:00 PM
    I like your poem you are a very god poet.

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 10:10:00 PM
    Riveting write!

  1. Date: 11/10/2011 2:13:00 AM
    This is tight as they get! Clinton Max?

  1. Date: 9/6/2011 11:47:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Kyle. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/5/2011 11:39:00 AM

  1. Date: 6/5/2011 9:35:00 PM
    truly a poet and I bet you know it!

  1. Date: 5/29/2011 2:59:00 PM
    Oh how very sad, but I am sure very accurate. I have just read all of your poetry and find it very appealing. Welcome to our pages. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 5/28/2011 2:46:00 PM
    Strong poem here. I really dig the premise and how you carefully unravelled everything towards the ending.

  1. Date: 5/28/2011 1:30:00 AM
    powerful write here