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Master Engineer

Ear before radio
Eye  before television
Bird before plane
Migration before GPS
Brain before computer
Evolution or creation?

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  1. Date: 6/5/2013 11:51:00 PM
    Super thought-provoking! I loved the way you expressed yourself in this, makes people think. I'm definitely not for evolution (I get irritated when people call it science instead of what it actually is... a belief). I wrote a poem on evolution called Primordial Soup... you might get a kick out of it. Thanks for checking out my haiku today... makes my day :)

  1. Date: 12/19/2010 3:57:00 PM
    Susan, What an attention getter! This one really makes its readers think: We have become so (too?) dependent upon technology. Barbara J. Henry

  1. Date: 11/16/2010 8:04:00 AM
    it is creation and not evolution

  1. Date: 9/17/2010 3:46:00 AM
    The master's design, alone created the human mind, no accident could these contrast find, and if God created the unseen, then why not also the seen? Thanks for the kind thoughts on my poem, I felt so special to be honored by you, one love

  1. Date: 9/9/2010 9:19:00 AM
    Ah, this brings a good question, I do love the way you put "ear before radio" and so on, it shows what was before what was invented or created, enjoyed your write..P.D.

  1. Date: 3/31/2010 5:58:00 AM
    Yes, Susan, evolution or creation, that is the question. But without brains no computers, without birds, no planes etc. So nature is alway one step ahead! I liked very much reading this poem. Keep your pen flowing and thank you for your comments...Happy Easter! Gert

  1. Date: 2/28/2010 6:17:00 PM
    I am sure I read this poem again. Well enjoyed reading again....Loved it

  1. Date: 2/28/2010 2:30:00 PM
    Interesting thoughts about electronics and industry. I notice you did not say ear before music or eye before beauty. Thanks for your comments on my work. Happy Writing

  1. Date: 2/18/2010 8:21:00 AM
    This is always a question. Were we created or did we evolve. God Bless Phyl

  1. Date: 2/16/2010 9:08:00 AM
    Hmmm, i really love this one. Makes me think a little (: xo Rain

  1. Date: 2/14/2010 9:29:00 AM
    this is good, were we created or did we elvove, heck why not both creation through evolution, good interesting poem that gives lots of though. Let's hope we don't evolve to create or fall hmmm

  1. Date: 2/14/2010 12:46:00 AM
    thanks for comment but I am not that smart just loved to share what the Word of God has done in my heart

  1. Date: 2/13/2010 8:54:00 PM
    Wow, thats a clever poem. Makes you think. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on my poem. Hugss

  1. Date: 2/12/2010 9:41:00 PM
    an amazingly written piece that shows the wisdom and imagination that you hold,,it is amazing the technology we have encountered, but as well we should remember and not cloud our senses or lose them for if that were to happen,,all sensitivity would be gone,,Thank you for your thought provoking words written within,,,Blessings..cecil

  1. Date: 2/12/2010 4:03:00 PM
    Chicken or the egg, huh. I like poems that make me think. nice one.

  1. Date: 2/12/2010 2:17:00 PM
    Wow, this is really clever, Susan. And it gives us so much to think about. Well done! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/12/2010 1:34:00 PM
    No just kidding, I really enjoyed reading your poetry!! Keep writing:)

  1. Date: 2/12/2010 1:27:00 PM
    The title says it all.

  1. Date: 2/12/2010 12:56:00 PM
    Clever and thought provoking. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 2/11/2010 11:52:00 PM
    interesting conceptual thinking - nice one!!! Thank You for commenting on my poetry. Peace Always Fathima