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Below is the poem entitled MANUSCRIPT which was written by poet Monterey Sirak. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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The stillness of a 
mountain ravine
overflowing with lush foliage
at the base of a tumbling waterfall
is painted with a rich cascade of words

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  1. Date: 12/6/2014 7:40:00 AM
    Ahh!! I enjoyed reading this one..I can see the scene..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

  1. Date: 8/17/2014 7:44:00 AM
    It seems I have made my way back to the base of your mountain once again. I am no less in awe this third time.

  1. Date: 5/2/2014 3:13:00 AM
    Love your manuscript. Dutch Greetings Elly

  1. Date: 3/28/2014 12:07:00 PM
    Your brush did wonders here! goes with my favs. :) // paul

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 8:28:00 AM
    Good morning Monterey. I enjoyed reading this one again.

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 11:08:00 PM
    Awesome words you got up here, think I'll put this picture in fav's ;}

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 2:23:00 PM
    Lovely you captured the spirit with your words ty for looking in on my work Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 12:59:00 AM
    gosh, I believe I have seen all your poetry. I can't imagine you don't have a whole lot of other poems piled up somewhere! Bring them on!!

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 7:38:00 AM
    I feel like I am there, great job.

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 1:07:00 AM
    Very nice picture you paint! It strangely brought to mind the nature paintings of Bob Ross (if he was a poet, oh the things he would write!).

  1. Date: 6/1/2013 6:52:00 PM
    You paint a pretty pictures with words. Kim

    Sirak Avatar Monterey Sirak
    Date: 6/2/2013 6:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it
  1. Date: 6/1/2013 3:25:00 PM
    Very nicely done!! Great metapahor.

    Sirak Avatar Monterey Sirak
    Date: 6/2/2013 6:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a bunch, you are always so encouraging