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Luck Incarnate

The Lucky Man in the Mirror

When I see her gorgeous face,
I am lifted. I'm alive. 
There's no feeling, thought or ecstacy,
That could rival her brown eyes.

And an hour is a second,
As if time had been defied.
And the clock is always frozen,
When I have her by my side.

When she approaches with a smile,
Any dreary thought can break.
I am baffled by her beauty.
I'm confounded by her shape.

Her brown hair is like a waterfall,
Flowing steady in its place.
My heart leaps from my chest,
When she moves it from her face.

And her lips, they are a mirror,
Where I see a lucky man.
They compel me to remember,
Just how fortunate I am.

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  1. Date: 5/27/2015 8:42:00 AM
    Hi KYLE.. Just a quick note to congratulate you for having this impressive write posted on Soup's home page for the whole world to easily see.. Well, at least many poetry lovers will get to check it out. Blessings and keep writing wonderful works! -LM

  1. Date: 5/24/2015 11:11:00 PM
    KYLE, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love

  1. Date: 6/13/2011 8:08:00 PM
    This was great Kyle but I wish you wrote about what you see about yourself.

  1. Date: 6/6/2011 8:26:00 PM
    a very sweet and beautiful write, filled with your true devotion and love,,wonderfully penned,,and Thank you for reading and leaving your words upon mine,,Blessings...Cecil

  1. Date: 6/6/2011 9:58:00 AM
    Kyle, i love this :) it's so beautiful.

  1. Date: 5/29/2011 1:38:00 PM
    Beautiful..:) thank you for the comment Smiles :@)

  1. Date: 5/28/2011 7:45:00 AM
    I beautiful love poem, lovely and welcome to poetrysoup~~

  1. Date: 5/28/2011 1:29:00 AM
    i love it my friend