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loyalty to blindbelieve

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loyalty to blindbelieve

I still cry to the blues with sure hope;
Reeled in enmity of mine brainwaves to better believe,
My thoughts shudder within me unknowing how much more I can endure!
I rake through the dark precinct of faith blinds;
To ferret out the unseen light,
But then I begin to realize…
I’m walled somewhere where light is no light but darkness!
I’m walled somewhere where I would never free myself!

I’ve been betrayed by my loyalty to believing blindly,
Sealed me off within the walls of the deepest pit of hell,
I can’t fight from within…I can’t!
Inner death stuffed somewhere in me; 
Bit by bit leading me to rest when it suits! 

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  1. Date: 6/29/2012 11:30:00 AM
    Very profound and honest.

    Leteng Avatar Mpho Leteng
    Date: 2/19/2015 6:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Affirmative, I like to be as honest as i can possibly be this leaks out into my write...
  1. Date: 3/21/2012 1:48:00 PM
    Interesting write Mpho must look up Kachikau to see what it is like xx Thanks for leaving a comment on my work Iappreciate you taking the time to read and comment xx

    Leteng Avatar Mpho Leteng
    Date: 2/19/2015 6:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You should! but I've changed the poem a bit to fit the tym, hope i haven't messed up!
  1. Date: 3/20/2012 5:36:00 AM
    Thank you for adding your spices to the soup today Mpho. I am enjoying reading all the appetizing poetry posted here today. Have a wonderful week. May inspiration hit the tip of your pen and never let go. Love, Carol