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Love Sick

The weight is dark and heavy, Like black waters swirling deep It ebs and flows with selfish tugs As blood-stained tauntings seep. The waves have gone with reason, The mem'ries flood the shore As it touches sand with reaching hands It pulls back, then grasps for more. Deep below, the darkest pits The sharpest rocks will wait so calm; As soon as swimmers brush the edge They'll bleed in natures palm. I've dipped my toes in, felt it cold, Rememb'ring shivers dry; I'll pull my legs back to my chest, With only waves to feel you by.

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  1. Date: 4/28/2012 12:46:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading this one today..It has great allure to it plus good bones with flow, rhyme, and rhythm..I am glad that I chose this one to read today...Sara

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 5:59:00 AM
    How romantic dear poet this write is ! And the vision of your journey was capturing ! Great write Dana'lynn ! Have a beautiful weekend my friend....much love, james

  1. Date: 4/24/2012 8:06:00 PM
    Smile ˜ Something sooo very beautiful about you ˜ I can feel its beauty deep inside my Soul * This is a very beautiful poem although, I have a different view for You ˜ Sweet beautiful lady ˜ Love always, John!:) ˜