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Lonely woman

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© 02-17-2013, G. V., All Rights Reserved
(sonnet with two ending couplets)

Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A
Contest Name: any poem under 15 lines
Placement: 2nd

second ending couplet:

She offers red wine toasts where sorrows fade,
and glimmers laughs the timely wrongs to trade.

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Lonely woman

Lonely woman

The rain of winter days, repeats their words,
the messages of dusk and truths perceives,
her passing wraith the seaman's heart aggrieves,
- unspoken words percuss on festal chords.

Once at nocturnal hours the shadows link,
- that lonely woman's never sung, night song,
red wine - divine, her splendor flies fore dawn,
while eminent his sails, egress to sink.

Sea waves convey to ports two dancing forms
where tears and laughs subside, when dark distils,
with soul that gallivants, love wounds she heals,
rain priestess saves her lonesomeness in storms.

With colored rainbows flies to highs and bold,
sun's crimson spills what shoreline mists enfold.

© 02-17-2013, G.Venetopoulos

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  1. Date: 3/24/2014 10:50:00 PM
    Giorgio What a creative and descriptive story you have written. The imagery pulls it all together. Thanks for the great comment on my Bumblebee Jim poem.

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 11:31:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading this excellent sonnet Giorgio. It is a novel idea (for me at any rate) to include 2 possible endings to the poem. I might explore this device with my poems, as I have felt that some of them could possibly end in more than one conclusion. Thank you for reading and supporting my poetry. Kind regards, Su

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 11:52:00 AM
    Uniquely creative ...Enjoyed reading today..Sara

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 4:12:00 AM
    Beautifully done Giorgio...Can't decide which ending I like better because both are superb...Love the name 'rain priestess' as well...Congratulations - Tim

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 9:36:00 AM
    congrats on a great win. (:c Jenish

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 7:52:00 PM
    super sonnet Giorgio I prefer number two ending congrats on win Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 2:31:00 PM
    Giorgio, lovely and one of the best..... ..... congratulations Love ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 10:56:00 AM
    My honor to share this placement......with such high quality verses...I cannot compare......(or choose between the two endings ! :)

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 10:26:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning place xx

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 8:57:00 AM
    Your captivating and stunning style washed over me in this beautiful poem with two beautiful endings.. Congratulations on your win :)

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 6:01:00 AM
    A wonderful and lovely poem Giorgio, I love the second ending couplet very much. Congratulations with your winning poem. I posted a new poem called "Summer Rain." hope you enjoy the poem... smiles, can't wait to hear from you... love LINDA

  1. Date: 8/4/2013 5:02:00 PM
    nicely done here ;} thank you for reading my words ;}

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 10:23:00 AM
    You have painted a beautiful picture of a lonely woman. Very much enjoyed . thanks for sharing....... Lucilla

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 8:15:00 PM
    You have such flare!

  1. Date: 7/19/2013 12:31:00 AM
    Superbly beautiful poem friend're such a great poet..thanks for my placement in your contest :) Have a nice day! :) Hugs, Maria

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 3:33:00 PM
    You never cease to amaze me with your verse..Well done..Excellent is the word

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 8:43:00 AM
    It feels as if viewing a wonderful painting, by one of the masters.....It sets a mood, a timeless place, a woman, and her sorrow. Beautifully written, as always. ps.....I am so honored to be "dancing" with such wonderful poems submitted for your recent contest. Thank you so much !

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 10:47:00 PM
    So much mood and mystique and all the layers invite us to read over and again. Thanks for your wonderful writing. SuZ

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 6:52:00 AM
    You are a painter of beautiful images... kudos! Cheers, Jack

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 7:39:00 PM
    Hello G., I love the ending imagery, when time flies. a road to riches one holds on 2... like a screaming wave through the wind, the poem is deep. beautiful, epic. Love Linda