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Light Six Candles

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Light Six Candles

I light a candle to honor Your light
 ..................................Your life
 ..................................Your love

You take love over gold
A lovesick humble man You`ve made me
All we gotta do now is to keep up the heartbeat
See You standing there in the candle light..
I worship the life You`ve given me

High on love,high on life
Wheel of love keeps on rollin`
Two lovers becomes three lifes
Three lifes makes a family
The big wheel of life keeps on turning

I light a candle to honor Your light
..................................Your energy
..................................Your aura

There`s no wind strong enough to blow out that candle
Stronger then any forces nature could ever come up with
In the midst of a crowd,Your energy lights up..
..stands out like a shining and heartfelt beam
Close enough to touch heaven,such a sence of paradise

Your spirit embraces mine
Twin souls of mesmerized equality
The big wheel keeps on turnin`
Its never wrong to let love be fulfilled close enough to touch paradise tonight

Your energy keeps giving my life a meaning

July 26th 2012

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  1. Date: 8/5/2012 11:52:00 AM
    Mr. Romance!! How did I miss this one? this is a gem and with so much feeling Arild.. You are probably right about our Winter not even comparing to yours. enjoyed this gem, love & hugs CTC

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 1:58:00 PM
    Beautifully written and touching.

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 12:46:00 AM
    Your style of writing and presentations are so good,Arild

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 12:37:00 PM
    Very soulful poem! Keep it up! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 11:23:00 AM
    Sensual, loving and soooo soooo sweet !! She must be melting, melting !!! Love it !!

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 5:14:00 PM
    Oh wow!! I love this so so beautiful :)

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 4:14:00 PM
    I love the depth of this poem,I lit a candle Arild,great write

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 4:03:00 PM
    Why'd ya make me cry, Arild!? Phenomenol energy entwined in these lines and in the pauses...Your wife will be as putty in your hands! haha...wonderful romantic write for Anne Lise! This is outstanding...gwendolen

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 6:46:00 AM
    a happy saturday to you and anne, arild.. hop all's well!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 7/27/2012 5:43:00 PM
    love keeps my candle going, enjoyed your write,..pd.

  1. Date: 7/27/2012 4:25:00 PM
    an astonishing expression of romance Arild..the candle takes on a lovely persona in this piece mesmerizing the reader to a glorious imagery of beauty.. happy weekend luv..

  1. Date: 7/27/2012 12:54:00 PM
    Very romantic work that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Norway must be a beautiful country..You said that my opening stanza sounded like Norway...Thanks for stopping by...Sara

  1. Date: 7/27/2012 3:34:00 AM
    Arild you big smoothie you! Anne-Lise must love this...have a great weekend my friend..David

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 4:13:00 PM
    speaking of everlasting love, you got it all, arild...anne will love this--- a most tender, warm somg!..ingat lagi!..:) huggs

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    Date: 7/27/2012 10:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ingat lagi,Nette:) Nikki tought me those two words:-)
  1. Date: 7/26/2012 3:57:00 PM
    You are a big romantic, arild. ME LIKES this one MUCHO.