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Life Begins

Starseeds jostle to enter as we strike an orgasmic light; spirit sparks burst from our centre. Cosmic colours quiver bright; sighs and cries, electric delight. Pearlized fluids mingle and pour lifelights in the black hearse of night. Fire filaments spill, soul strands soar.

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  1. Date: 8/18/2012 11:07:00 AM
    YEAH, you don't have to tell me. :-)\

  1. Date: 8/4/2011 8:08:00 PM
    Amazing job.. Well done. lee

  1. Date: 8/4/2011 1:26:00 PM
    Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of nette, charlotte

  1. Date: 8/4/2011 9:16:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Hutain" contest Charlotte. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/3/2011 11:25:00 PM
    another one I knew was gonna SOAR. Congratulations, Charlotte.

  1. Date: 8/3/2011 8:02:00 PM
    A most excellent win! Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/3/2011 7:41:00 PM
    Congratulations on your super win in Nette's contest, jag

  1. Date: 8/3/2011 3:16:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in the HUTAIN THIS ONE...contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud. Good job! Blessings, Caryl

  1. Date: 8/3/2011 2:49:00 PM
    Congrats Charlotte on your exciting win in Hutain contest with this prolific poetry luv..

  1. Date: 8/3/2011 2:12:00 PM
    Excellent view of Nette's theme and the photo!! Congratulations on a well deserved win!!!

  1. Date: 8/3/2011 1:24:00 PM
    Beautiful visual poetry Charlotte Enjoyed reading your poem. Love, Vie

  1. Date: 7/31/2011 4:24:00 PM
    wow, you really illustrated that picture well. I think this will be a big hit!!

  1. Date: 7/30/2011 10:48:00 AM
    this is my third time reading this. it makes a difference when you read it in the morning with a clear head. this comment started out to be one word. and that word, erotic. john

  1. Date: 7/29/2011 10:46:00 PM
    :-O Okay, now that is what I call GREAT poetry. Ahem, and is it hot in here, or what? Sultry write, Charlotte, and sure to place high in the contest. I loved how you had life and hearse in the same line. La petite morte? ;-) Sizzling! Cyndi

  1. Date: 7/29/2011 6:52:00 PM
    Beautiful write...God bless....old Jack