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Laughing At

I just cannot believe  
The way you both deceived
And now you’re laughing at me

You know what you did was wrong
Behind his hand he sniggers long
And you’re both laughing at me

You lied right to my face
You and him in an embrace
And you’re both laughing at me

But he left you all alone
Left you standing on your own
And I’m laughing at you

He saw you were the cheating kind
Someone nicer he did find
And I’m laughing at you

I met someone who could be true
Someone who told me “I love you”
And I’m laughing at you

Maybe one day we both will find
A time and place where we can be kind
And I won’t laugh at you or you at me

When we’re older more mature
In our love lives more secure
And I won’t laugh at you or you at me

When it’s all over and we both have won
Found and married the perfect one
And perhaps we’ll laugh together you and me

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  1. Date: 2/13/2013 6:06:00 PM
    HI my cutest friend OWEN... how are you.. stop here to read your talented writes... and wish you a very happy Valentine ,,, <3 <3 <3 Sk

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 8:19:00 PM
    This sounds serious! I hope it's just a fine write? Carry on my friend! :o)

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 2:50:00 AM
    Wow owen I captivated by this one, going straight to my fave box :D, great share and also the moral within :) - hug, yanny

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 8:54:00 AM
    there is pain in your poem and also way to find solace.i liked the blend and really a nice write.

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 4:24:00 PM
    This poem held a great honesty with alot emotional expressionism. I enjoyed reading it's truthfulness. keep up the good work my friend.

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 2:49:00 PM
    I like how you wished for a future where you will be laughing together. that was really nice, Owen. I enjoyed this one.

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 5:58:00 PM
    Honest....human....good work, Owen! Jimbo

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 2:10:00 PM
    Creative lines about a topic most everyone experiences..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 2:02:00 PM
    We live, We learn, We move on... I see a forgiving heart..... Enjoyed !!

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 5:31:00 AM
    life has a funny way of working out things,what goes around comes around,great write Owen

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 5:19:00 AM
    Laugh together as friends - a very good poem, Owen. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 3:15:00 PM
    love this one,..P.D.

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 6:07:00 AM
    soup mail..

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 2:49:00 PM
    this is excellent Owen, a real life situation, and a final solution of laughing together,, love how this poem flows....

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 12:25:00 PM
    still like this one Owen

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 11:18:00 AM
    Owen wow I like this a lot, great twist in it,very well done...David

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 10:05:00 AM
    Happy ending! MatthewAnish56

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:02:00 AM
    I love the way you took us through your hurt, joy, and finally desire for reconciliation and peace! This is a lovely poem as has been brought up from the depth of pain and has seen the light of triumph! All the best! Thanks for sharing!

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 4:26:00 PM
    Hope you will go on. He can heal any pain. Love you, Owen. May you always find happiness in everything you do. Great one!

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 3:33:00 PM
    Quite a journey you take us on here, who would think laughter would be the source of so much pain. Well written heartfelt piece Owen.