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Just like a mighty tree

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Just like a mighty tree

A love song for my beautiful wife

Just like a mighty tree.

The moon is waning in the sky
And soon she will be gone
She goes in circles just like we
It carries on and on
Cause everything it changes
That’s just the way it goes
Yet every day my love for you
All it can do is grow.

Everything goes in circles
But not my love for you
It travels in a upward line
And every day that’s new
It just reaches for the sky
It’s like a mighty tree
As its roots go underground
It rises endlessly.

Its branches ever reach the sky
And it’s the same for me
As my roots they stabilize
Just like that mighty tree
My love for you it climbs so high
And this will never cease
So Darling, read this song of mine
And let my words, you please.

28 November 2013 @ 0445hrs.

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  1. Date: 1/23/2014 4:13:00 PM
    Hi Peter, here I am again, got the new laptop so all should be alright. My friend, Vera must have Loved this one. It moves so silently into the heart with its gentle sublimity. Your analogie, your Love and the tree, that's just brilliant. I see I still have much to learn. You sing the song of Love so well my Friend. Long may your Love go on upon this earth, your Love ever strong as the mighty tree. May your Love remain strong my friends. A fine write Peter. Have a good day....MIKE.

  1. Date: 11/28/2013 11:18:00 AM
    The roots that feed, stabilise and make the tree of love grow are unseen: Respect, trust, admiration, companionship, compassion, devotion, sacrifice, agape! I admire your tree, its tallness, its beauty, its majestic youth of love! May God keep you healthy and happy for the rest of your lives for you a beackon of inspiration for the young are!

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 11/28/2013 2:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much Demetrio. Your words do me a great kindness....Peter
  1. Date: 11/27/2013 8:37:00 PM
    Lovely love poem/song. I bet your lady is most pleased. Looks as though you've fought hard to keep the rhyme in a few places, though the sentiment shines through.

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 11/28/2013 2:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Scott, I appreciate your comments...Peter