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Incessant Motion

                             This is just for you
                             little hummingbird….

                        How inspirational you are!!

                        You flit about in eager ways
                    From flower to flower you dance
                      always intent on your mission

                      Pretty crimson and deep blue
                       and shimmered green hues
                      on your lightning speed wings

                         Just watching your drive
                           makes me grin at you
                      How you are always so busy
                          Your vigor and energy

                            irrepressible you are
                             A bit mischievous….

                        Dashing through the wind


                    I love to watch your little loops
                   and your sudden stops in mid air
                        How you love to hover…..

                     Bright, you are….a light to me
                   On sad days when sorrow comes
                         you dash to my rescue
                              with super speed

                               How I love you
                            little hummingbird!!

This is for a dear friend. She is much like a hummingbird *^_^*

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  1. Date: 6/9/2009 5:49:00 PM
    my dad has atwo hummingbirds that sit on their porch every morning so sweet and innocent little creatures they are i love it

  1. Date: 3/26/2009 8:48:00 AM
    Exactly, exactly, only a hummingbird could write the hummingbird into song. I love this! God bles you.

  1. Date: 3/22/2009 5:02:00 PM
    Hummng birds are amazing creatures and this is a wonderful tribute to them and your dear friend as well! Simply beautiful! Love, Robin

  1. Date: 3/22/2009 1:48:00 PM
    smashing and a little humming bird-shweet! and thank you!!

  1. Date: 3/20/2009 1:41:00 AM
    A hope she like your talented tribute Christie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 3/19/2009 11:49:00 PM
    A comforting feeling when a friend dashes to our rescue, beautiful write Christie. " From flower to flower you dance always intent on your mission" my favorite lines...Raul

  1. Date: 3/19/2009 1:25:00 PM
    your poem is why this site is so much fun! really enjoyable write! incredible talent! Jim

  1. Date: 3/19/2009 1:13:00 PM
    Well babycakes Ive been called worse. I'd tell you how humbled I was by this but you'd know I was lying I LOVE IT.

  1. Date: 3/19/2009 12:21:00 PM
    and so she must be... little Bri.... : ) .... so sweet Christie......

  1. Date: 3/19/2009 8:59:00 AM
    This is so pretty, a wonderful tribute. I can just picture this, I've never seen a hummingbird in real life, but I know how amazing they are. This was just beautiful. Blessings, ~Michael~

  1. Date: 3/19/2009 8:20:00 AM
    Lovely, aren't these little birds a miracle? We have them at our feeder almost all year long. I'm sure your friend was thrilled. Bg

  1. Date: 3/19/2009 8:16:00 AM
    ....every line; every verse, is wrapped within love and thankfulness; and, is a classic keeper!!!:):)~Such, again, as one only as talented as You, "Beautiful Christie Moses," could ever entirely compose!!!:):)~"Perfectly Splendid Dear!!!:):)~"My Love Always To 'You & Your Little Angel Brianna,' Forever, John!!!"~"Have A Very Beautiful Day Dear Christie, Bye!!!":):) Smile....

  1. Date: 3/19/2009 8:11:00 AM
    ....a quality that all lives should aspire to attain unto~"That Is You!!!:):)~Your friend, is extremely blessed and fortunate to have "You & Your Innocent Purity" within her life~ As anyone would be, that could find "This Treasure of 'You,'" within their own lives!!!?:):)~And, I am absolutely positive, that she shall adore this glittering write and dedication to herself forever!!!:):).... cont....

  1. Date: 3/19/2009 8:04:00 AM
    "Pretty crimson and deep blue and shimmered green hues" ~Smile~I have to stop for a moment after rereading this fairytalistically laced poem~just to breathe in the essence of such a spectacular heart and soul that could create such a beautiful piece of wonderfully inspiring art!!!:):)~Actually, this is how I have somehow always envisioned "You & Your Astounding Beauties Dear Lady!!!:):)~"The Most Tender & Sincere of Hearts & Souls!!!!:):)....cont....

  1. Date: 3/19/2009 7:54:00 AM
    What a lovely and gentle and sweet poem; filled with colors, images and beauties; that only someone as gifted and talented as Yourself could seemingly ever express within such a wonderful way!!!:):)~"You Are Like A Gentle and Precious Flower, That Is Soo Very Magnificent To Behold!!!:):)~"Good Morning Gifted & Beautiful Christie & Your Priceless Little Brianna!!!:):)....cont....

  1. Date: 3/19/2009 7:51:00 AM
    That is one lucky friend. Incredible tribute. I adore hummingbirds, but even more so, the kind of people you wrote this beautiful poem for. Nothing like a true friend. This would certainly lift my spirits to the sky! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 3/19/2009 7:29:00 AM
    This poem is a smile!!! *^_^* Love it! ~ love, Carrie

  1. Date: 3/19/2009 6:38:00 AM
    And here I thought this was about me LOL Just kidding, the visuals are wonderful and I recognize the use of symbolism that represents that person you refer to. A marvelous write from a very talented poet. Keep it up and never stop writing my friend. Michael

  1. Date: 3/19/2009 6:06:00 AM
    I can hear this hummingbird singing sweet tunes when she comes to your aid with super duper cool to have a friend like that who will always look out for you...

  1. Date: 3/19/2009 5:45:00 AM
    This is a painting hidden in poetry well written my friend Cheers