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In Reverence to Vivaldi's "Storm"

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In Reverence to Vivaldi's "Storm"

How like a tempest 
It rages through my brain
           The sound of wild rain 
and making love in spontaneous 
Sparks fly from the flames
   red and burning in the night

A thunder crash inside my head
I feel the lightning stab the cracks
       of my heart…. rarely seen….
and far from caressed

Magnificent and virile
                   Pulsating and sexy
A raw thrash of tenacious
             tough notes that glide
and ripple like liquid sunshine


A heavy dew of crystal showers
Tinkling like wind chimes 
              Vivacious and turbulent 

How ripped of defenses 
                it leaves my naked soul….

Chaotic it titillates and tempts me
          with unfettered imaginings 
White sand and beaches
        Waves splashing bodies
                        in erotic embraces….

Sweet strawberry wine
           Lingers on my tongue
                   Pink and longing…. 
as I pirouette…laughing
           embracing life and love 
and all that makes a smile 
reach and touch my lonesome face

Vibrating and vital
Driving notes into my psyche
Dazzling this…..


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  1. Date: 7/25/2009 2:57:00 AM
    Congrats on your success in Michele's contest Christie.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 7/19/2009 11:49:00 AM
    Congrats Christie ..good for you..and Vivaldi! Love, BG

  1. Date: 7/19/2009 8:37:00 AM
    Brilliant and beautiful just like you! Warmest congrats Christie and so well deserved! XOXOXO

  1. Date: 7/19/2009 7:52:00 AM
    Congratulations, Christie. One of my favorite classical composers...and a favorite poem!! Well done! ~ Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 7/19/2009 7:29:00 AM
    magnificent victory in the "music" contest! Christie! well deserved! indeed, jim

  1. Date: 5/4/2009 7:38:00 AM
    Your mind for deatail is enormous and accurate ... you are an ethnographer of the word ... as for your poetic skill ... you have a gift divine. what awesome write, and how it makes that composers piece unveils like magic. Love

  1. Date: 3/12/2009 11:27:00 AM
    A very lyrical, descriptive write, I'm impressed. So you're going the classical (baroque) road, Ms. Christie? I never thought Vivaldi's works could evoke in you such romantic stirrings, maybe I have to familiarize myself with his works starting with Four Seasons. All this time I thought when it comes to classical romance it's Chopin domain and now you're saying it's Vivaldi's. Hmm. Regards, Fred

  1. Date: 3/11/2009 3:21:00 PM
    True to our sign, you delve deeply into the passions of your heart, exposing your soul's voice for all to hear- A fitting tribute to a master and his work!! Love, poet butterfly

  1. Date: 3/11/2009 2:39:00 PM
    Christie, this is a truly joyous work filled with the erotic magic of passion. It leaves me longing for intimacy! (The She-Demon will be in jail as soon as police can find her.) Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/6/2009 8:03:00 AM
    Thank you for placing me in your free verse contest Christie.You made my weekend.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 3/6/2009 3:05:00 AM
    Really enjoyed this one. Great vivid writing. I was wondering if there was any significance in the shape of this you start some lines in the middle for any reason or is it just to look nice?

  1. Date: 3/5/2009 1:02:00 PM
    You , Vivaldi and the weather AND all 4 seasons , as ever , as only the PP can .....

  1. Date: 3/5/2009 6:19:00 AM
    wonderful piece-- brilliant--masterful

  1. Date: 3/4/2009 8:20:00 PM
    Passionate words describing masterful work...Raul

  1. Date: 3/4/2009 7:01:00 PM
    The passion of the write matches the passion of the music. Its almost as if were carried away by the write when you got started and ended in a crescendo!!

  1. Date: 3/4/2009 11:13:00 AM
    MOSIECHRISTESFIED !!!!! .... passionate amazingly sumptuous verse.... Christie...what more can a poor dumb struck person write in praise... Thank you so much for your comment

  1. Date: 3/4/2009 9:34:00 AM
    ...."Beautiful Write Christie, Within Everyway!!!!"~"My Love To 'You and Your Precious Brianna,' Forevermore, John!!!":)) On we go....

  1. Date: 3/4/2009 9:32:00 AM
    .... and, that makes my heart smile soo much~for soo many different reasons!!!!?~And I feel soo blessed also, to have met "You," and forged this bonding~which I am so very very thankful for!!!!~Smile~for when I read such "Beautiful Words," as written within this write here~It amazes me~"You Amaze Me!!!!"~I would have to say, "That 'You' Are The Dream Come True For Many Hearts, Within Countless Ways!!!!....cont....

  1. Date: 3/4/2009 9:13:00 AM
    Ahh, "I Love This!!!"~Because it is "You!!!"~And You have soo much "Beauty and Passion" inside....what a sincerely wonderful "Dream Come True~'You'" are going to be for someone someday!!!!!~If I were to predict or prophecy, as to Your future dear, "Amazing and Beautiful Christie Moses," then I would have to say, that "You" are going to someday be within Your own right, an astonishing piece of literary history!!!!....cont....

  1. Date: 3/4/2009 8:52:00 AM
    This is another sweet write that makes my mind relax and be at ease..forgetting all worries and relishing the beauty that surrounds me..