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In Many, Many Years


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                                  |               Ruben O.               |
                                  |             1969--2069             |
                                  |                                           |
                                  |        No light at the end        |
                                  |         of the tunnel, yet         |
                                  |       Not even the tunnel       |
                                  |       and my nose itches!       |
                                  |                                           |
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So fictional!! : )


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  1. Date: 4/12/2012 1:49:00 PM
    Ha,ha...I love those after life story tellers... I see you had trouble trying to keep the line in place on the right hey? I too with my shape poems. Very tricky! Nice write. :-)

  1. Date: 2/11/2012 7:34:00 PM
    hahaha, I still remember this one winning in my contest!! So long ago. I hope you are back for good and that your number of poems will build and build!!

  1. Date: 10/27/2010 9:12:00 PM
    Congratulations on your fantastic win in the contest Ruben! You have a great imagination and a very gifted pen...but you already know this.. very clever!! ....Always, Audrey

  1. Date: 10/27/2010 4:56:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 10/25/2010 1:26:00 PM
    Love this the first time I read it!!! Congrats my friend

  1. Date: 10/25/2010 10:44:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Andrea's contest Ruben. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/25/2010 8:50:00 AM
    Congrats Ruben on your big win in Andrea's contest with this awesome epitaph.. and a great design as well my friend.. super cool like u luv... enjoy your win ... with luv..

  1. Date: 10/25/2010 8:21:00 AM
    Have to say it......this was my favorite! Number 1 in my list !!! Soooo funny! Congratulations, Ruben!!

  1. Date: 10/25/2010 7:17:00 AM
    This is so witty Ruben. enjoyed, congrats on your win in the contest. Harry

  1. Date: 10/25/2010 6:29:00 AM
    I knew this would do well, Ruben. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 10/25/2010 5:08:00 AM
    Congratulations on this well deserved win, Ruben

  1. Date: 10/25/2010 4:40:00 AM
    Congrats, Ruben. Excellent. Very clever. Nice going. Ralph

  1. Date: 10/25/2010 3:43:00 AM
    congrats on winning 3rd spot.....innovative.... luv/Best wishes always... Hitendra Mehta

  1. Date: 10/25/2010 12:08:00 AM
    Congratulations Ruben!

  1. Date: 10/24/2010 11:53:00 PM
    Congratulations Ruben ...this is really funny! take care~Deb

  1. Date: 10/24/2010 10:45:00 PM
    Hi Ruben. Are you still alive? Nice headstone you got. Is it marble? :) Ain't got no tombstone in mine as you read my skull is popping out full of ...daisies :) hehehe!

  1. Date: 10/24/2010 9:50:00 PM
    congrats on your win with this, well done my friend! And so glad you gave yourself at least a hundred years!

  1. Date: 10/24/2010 9:26:00 PM
    I knew this was a winner the first time I read this one. Ruben, congratulations on a well-deserved win!~Chris

  1. Date: 10/24/2010 9:21:00 PM
    So happy this placed high, Ruben-- totally loved the creativity you put here and funny too :) Super congrats!! -- nikko :)

  1. Date: 10/24/2010 9:13:00 PM
    Rueben, a great epitaph, and congratulations for another top win in one of my contests. Gosh, I wish I could have seen one NOT fictional from you. I bet it would be even funnier. heehee