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Im holding the gun backwards

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Im holding the gun backwards

Go suck on a handgun, but 
don't ever pull the trigger,
Thoughts so lost but i know i 
still miss her
Time spent with her slows so 
sweetly, and that bullet stops 
mid flight and stares at me so 

And her smile makes me 
ecstatic yet i run for the bleach, 
how did this calm guy ever 
sweep her off her feet?
At the eye of the storm its all 
peace, as i watch my world 
crumble but never does it 

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  1. Date: 12/8/2012 10:14:00 AM
    Interesting and dark read. Thanks for sharing.