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I Wonder

I wonder, where you are
I wonder, what your doing
I wonder, if your near or far 
I wonder, where your going
I wonder, what your up to
I wonder, are you happy
I wonder, always about you
I wonder, do you think of me
I wonder, if ill see you one day
I wonder, if were once again meet
I wonder, what I would actually say
I wonder, would it just be a repeat
I wonder, how it would turn out
I wonder, if issues are resolved
I wonder, would it be heartfelt
I wonder, have we evolved

just so much going on in my head right now
Im still working on something else at moment called lifes journey
this was just something that poped up but at time i met this girl one night few weeks
back after going out to a party will i ever see her again but also losely based on exgirlfriend

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  1. Date: 4/25/2014 5:08:00 PM
    This piece is heartfelt...David, you are a wonderful poet. Keep it up and I like the repetition.... I wonder If you know that you're a good poet I wonder If you already know it? :) I tried! haha -DWB

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 7:50:00 AM
    Thanks for sharing this very thoughtful poem my dear friend, David! An awesome write indeed! I extremely enjoyed reading it! More blessings and graces to you! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 12:55:00 AM
    Life is one big mystery.I wonder if that s the beauty of it or the sad part?Lovely poem transmitting feelings.Wondering is what helps us survive at.times .Re your comment..yep you should rewrite your poem Scott.

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 3:48:00 PM
    Well I wonder how great life's journey is going to be if this just popped in your head....loved it..

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 7:06:00 PM
    I love the approach you took with this piece- the repetition is marvelous! Quite an amazing write, my dear poet friend- and quite well penned! Hugs :)

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 12:52:00 AM
    very romantic revealing the mood and make me also wonder with you..was caught in the mood..thnks for your comment on 'Valentine' david...

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 2:28:00 PM
    Hello David, it is always nice in receiving words and hi's from you. ATM I'm like you, i haven't had much time on my computer. I try to work things from my phone. but, it is not possible at times.. about your poem: wondering will keep you on your toes. like you said maybe in the future. always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 11:50:00 AM
    David I think you are right, there seems to be a lot to this, ...David