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I am not her

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I am not her

I am not her

She left on that morn

after so many nights

in waiting for your return

After so many moments

of empty kisses

 in silent darkness

Slowly She left

but you where too busy to notice

I am not her

She cuts her wrist

to stop its pulse rate

She blocks her heart

to end its beating

She swollows pills

to hide from consciousness

She wakes from dreams

to kill the memory

I am not her

I am unchained

I am free

I love life

and all that's beautiful

I am not her

I still love butterflies

I still pick daises

and sing in gardens

I still watch rainbows

and paint with colours

I still walk on sunshine

alone,but not in solitude

I am not her

She is gone

She's slowly gone

but you never noticed.

Fiction poem-No wrist cutting and pills and etc etc.. just an inspired poem ..but fiction..No worry to none :)

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  1. Date: 3/20/2012 5:44:00 PM
    Truly great words that speak to me.

  1. Date: 3/20/2012 2:21:00 AM
    Hi Charma :) You've definitely depicted somebody here who is in despair...and yet you have also shown that there is still strength that can be used from deep within to overcome it--you yourself have a wonderful way with words that tell their story...thanks for the fave and smiles and hugs to you! :)

  1. Date: 3/19/2012 12:47:00 PM
    wow Charma u stated it all so i,pressively my friend .. grand emotion sizzles and leaping the hurdles of luv are noted in this write.. empty kisses never fill one's aching heart.. so tenderly penned .. keep in touch..luv..

  1. Date: 3/19/2012 12:09:00 PM
    Smile ˜ Kool & Cooler ˜ Love, John!:) *

  1. Date: 3/19/2012 1:38:00 AM
    Well Done, Charmaine! BEAUTIFUL! I can relate to empathetic inspiration/fiction verses reality ;) In this day and time, I wonder if we as poets/artists shall have to put disclaimers on all our work---for fear someone may call: 911-- Big Hugggss my friend...with pen in hand--press on!!~Deb~

  1. Date: 3/19/2012 12:26:00 AM
    "I still walk on sunshines/alone,but not in solitude" !! Brilliant! Of course you're not her! Nobody is like you, talented Charmaine! Humm...I think this voice is talking about something that provoked a change in her life...or a discovery, a sudden recognition of their own true identity or nature. Exceptional piece! Ruben.

    Chircop  Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 3/19/2012 12:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes always read my thoughts so well.. Its about changes and trying to see what shall i live for ,instead what shall i die for..What is beautiful instead of what's mal and bad..Thanks for your kinc comments.. i really appreciate each word here.Have a lovely night/day-Charmaine
  1. Date: 3/17/2012 10:33:00 AM
    Congrats, Char. You have nailed one of life's worst diseases, the poor meism. This may inspire someone who is sick with the disease. Love, daver

    Chircop  Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 3/19/2012 12:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Daver for stopping by.. i do wish it inspires someone to gets better dear-Charma
  1. Date: 3/17/2012 9:42:00 AM
    First of all Im glad its fiction,Charmaine.But I must say it is a very insightful write you`re sharing with us.Love the depth in it,meaningful write.Hugs,Arild

    Chircop  Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 3/19/2012 12:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much Arild..Yes it is fiction.. in the message there will always be some truth such as holding to what is beautiful instead of what is dark in life..thanks for stopping by-Charma