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HOW FLEETING THE LUSTER

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HOW FLEETING THE LUSTER



Black roses sprawl, to droop, then fade raking tendrils of her attic’s shades; a brief display which glints inked nights only for time’s sake, boughs do parade. How fleeting the luster of stems’ arms, between weeping dusk and chilled sun twigs crack like love's farewell --sad moon, a wish-- the fragrance of bliss gone. She digs mementos; gazing afar perhaps to touch the light of stars, that hide dawn’s lamp from memories instead her eyes reflect more scars. Though pain mocks unbecoming heart a young bough nestles on ground's arc; granting reprieve in place of tears to kindle sparks for dance to start. --------- Night-Dark-Black-Happy Sad Contest of Craig by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 10/5/2012 6:05:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Craig's contest Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 8:45:00 AM
    Nette, Wonderful poetry again. I often feel like many of us are grains of sand in a stream and you are that bright golden glimmer (Luster) amongst us and this poem proves it, and like I wrote to Linda-Marie, your title is poetry as well. This poem says so much that it becomes a metaphor for so many feelings that we each can hold in our own way. It would be fun to see analysts like those who tore apart Robert Frost's poems have fun with this-----I'll never tell!!

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 7:33:00 AM
    You truly captured the essence of this contest with your writing here, Nette. I had not even seen this one of yours yet. Congratulations on your well crafted poem.

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 1:33:00 AM
    Congratulations nette this is superb xx

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 1:08:00 PM
    Nette, :-) A wonderful congratulations in Craig's "Night-Dark-Black-Happy-Sad" contest. Nice reading and supporting all his winners. have a nice and wonderful day, *PD

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 5:57:00 AM
    Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 2:38:00 AM
    Nette, Many congratulations on an awesome win with this wonderful poem!! this was a sure winner.

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 10:35:00 PM
    congratulations :)

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 9:48:00 PM
    another great poem from a great poet...Congratulations on your big win Nette :) hand salute!! cheers!

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 8:49:00 PM
    beautiful flow, lovely poem Nette. congrats on your win. Lee

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 8:32:00 PM
    Great poem... wonderful... Congratulations on your win!! Terry

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 6:19:00 PM
    Congratulations on a magnificent poem, and your win with it.

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 8:01:00 AM
    Delightful,sad but such a beautiful written poem dear nette.Oh hey,get ready to catch me!! Am sliding down from a rainbow to say "Howdy",right into your lovely garden..LOL:-) Its nice to have some time off and be a Souper again!! Hugs and Love,Arild

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 6:11:00 AM
    Nice Rondeau... Great imagery... Good luck in the contest...Terry

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 5:54:00 AM
    A deep powerful write Nette. Lovely description of black roses and dark night, day's fading luster. I think its a great entry for the contest.

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 5:31:00 AM
    beautiful nette, a truly inspirational yet sad rendering, love that word Kindles, a word from my childhood.....

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 5:06:00 PM
    an outstanding verse of exotic composition Nette luv .. the vivid portrait of those black roses drooping and fading .. luster diminished .. wow so mesmerizing .. winningways if for any contest .. so so many posted ..oh..

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 2:28:00 PM
    Sad but beautifully written Nette. (no contest -: (--- lol ... oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 2:25:00 PM
    Interesting work..It has a dark feeling to it..I hope that you are not feeling sad..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 2:05:00 PM
    What an undeniably clever write, full of spark and intrigue my friend! I love this incredibly enticing poem! I really enjoyed this fascination of a wondrous write! The memories brought forth from within this write, are true and stern, a glorious truth within it Nette! This is an awesome poem, a harmonious piece, Great Work!!

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