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Hot flash

Softly exits her name, past mine lips

Most assuredly; 
from the burst of this heart
Her perplexing stare at the likes of I
consume every second of time  

Her lips curve upward
with invite
to mine

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  1. Date: 4/21/2012 6:28:00 PM
    Hi James - You have a very unique style that is very pleasant to read. Effect on me is that I want to read more of your poetry. - Gail

  1. Date: 2/8/2012 7:40:00 PM
    from memory going into fantasy mode.

  1. Date: 2/8/2012 12:44:00 PM
    well she sounds like a lovely vision James.. great apparel and soft words to depict her mood.. a precious creation luv..

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 12:40:00 PM
    Probably looking at you; I see the sparks flying! Such a treat to read your poems James, love them always.

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 8:28:00 AM
    gushing here, james... your imagery is is so lyrical and sensually tender... lovely! :) huggs!

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 8:25:00 AM
    This conjures up a world of surmise - mainly loving. Love, daver

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 6:08:00 AM
    Lovely post ... so innocent, pure soft and beautiful.. the description you give..Charma

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 9:15:00 PM
    JP.....thank you for your always kind comments, your validation is important to my art! this write, unyielding in it's innocence, with very soft edges, nice! jimbo

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 1:58:00 PM
    Very descriptive work that you have penned in this one..I have been thinking about purple today but in a totally different frame of reference...Your presence at my work was uplifting..I hope that I can finish that one..Dont' know exactly which way I will go..Sara