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Below is the poem entitled Hollowman which was written by poet Suhayl Schroeder. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Last week in the gym
We had P.E.
They called 'whimp'
And you smiled
And you called me
And you called me

This is hollowman
Hollowman has seen it all
He cut chords
He hit the floor

Can you feel this
Can you see this
Because I see you
I feel you

I put you up on the wall
You wonderwomen
6 feet tall
This is Hollowman

You wrote on the bathroom wall
Don't worry
Hollowman has seen it all
You cut the strings
I hit the floor
I'm hollow
Cause you say I am
You see the boy
But I'm the man

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  1. Date: 12/29/2009 9:29:00 AM
    Love the creative play and mystery of the imagery. Welcome to poetry soup, may you enjoy each moment in our friendship, and may your talent inspire us, as much as any may inspire you. One love.

  1. Date: 12/28/2009 10:56:00 PM
    absurd but great!