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Here comes the sun...

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Here comes the sun...

It is cold today,
the wind slaps my face.

On the disillusioned carriage
people push and hit,
they spit and spite.

They clench their jaws,
and grind their teeth.

This is a journey to another waste of time
and it won't buy freedom,
it's still too cold.

Hang on in - the warmth is coming,
the summer will be here soon.

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  1. Date: 5/5/2010 3:19:00 AM
    Good description of how winter grabs ones soul..

  1. Date: 5/5/2010 2:45:00 AM
    well done, enjoyed the read, p.d.

  1. Date: 5/5/2010 1:44:00 AM
    I Love that warm sun,lovely poem Jonathan. .Charma