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Her photo from violence scene unfolds her tale

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Her photo from violence scene unfolds her tale

Strands in mud in her flight away,
As problem wasps gathered around.
On khaki  emotions rebound;
A lamb lost its way.

Harsh orders: cracks on character;
Divorce: her small hump;
Two little stomachs: hump on hump;
Her police uniform: wanted unwanted shelter.

Storm of khaki police;
Uprooted sense violently.
Camera mouths gobbled voraciously,
And vomited on front of dailies.

Sudden kick on abdomen did land;
Pain flowers scattered on visage hers.
Oh! that haunting photograph hers!
''Mrs.Apanna, what a tragic strand!’’


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  1. Date: 3/14/2011 8:31:00 PM
    Fabiyas, just now seeing you won with this one. A big congratulations to you. It reminds me of a time I was in Morocco and saw a little boy steal an orange and get kicked repeatedly by the police and even in his ear. It is an image that always stays with me.

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 10:37:00 AM
    Hey Fabiyas, congratulations on your win ;)

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 5:13:00 AM
    many congratulations for this win.

  1. Date: 3/8/2011 11:28:00 PM
    You sure got me intrigued with this one, Fabiyas! You caught my attention with your lines-- Congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 3/8/2011 8:39:00 PM
    excellent poem, congrats on this winner. Harry

  1. Date: 3/8/2011 8:37:00 PM
    Congrats FABIYAS on another amazing win in Chris's contest my friend.. amazing words.. awesome write.. enjoy your win..luv..

  1. Date: 3/8/2011 5:51:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win, Fabiyas! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/8/2011 4:53:00 PM
    thought provoking piece, many congrats on your win in the contest

  1. Date: 3/8/2011 1:30:00 PM
    Intriguing and gripping details and imagery in these lines. Some of the metaphors eluded me, which made me realize that this was a great poem haha! Congratulations and thank you for supporting my contest!~Chris

  1. Date: 3/8/2011 12:55:00 PM
    Congratulations on the ninth place win in the contest of Chris, Fabiyas

  1. Date: 3/8/2011 11:51:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Chris's contest Fabiyas. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/26/2011 11:02:00 AM
    a sordid yet wonderful weave of a story from your nimble pen, fabiyas!! stunning! :) nette

  1. Date: 1/16/2011 11:58:00 AM
    you have soup mail

  1. Date: 1/16/2011 6:34:00 AM
    Fabiyas......moving tragic tale well depicted. Police all around seems to be devoid of emotions.Thnx for reading my verse "India Shining" and leaving encouraaging comments. Best wishes/Luv Hitendra Mehta

  1. Date: 1/15/2011 8:52:00 PM
    wow! what a poem,, glad i stoped by to read.. deep & awesome,..p.d.

  1. Date: 1/15/2011 2:45:00 PM
    A terrible life it seems this person has for existence FABIYAS and that khaki emotions and khaki police just intrigued me so.. divorce is never easy and two children to feed ..even more difficult to survive.. that last stanza is masterful my friend... enjoyed with luv..

  1. Date: 1/15/2011 1:20:00 PM
    Hey new friend I think you've forced a free verse into this form, it doesn't fit the topic...if needs to be free verse..sometimes this happens can you try it again and soup mail it to me? Just to see? Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/15/2011 12:54:00 PM
    I am not sure about these events, for example if Apanna is a woman's name or not and if she is a cop who was beat or something, but I really loved the visual way you describe things, particularly the third stanza, the unique way you portrayed the paparazzi with their cameras clicking. Luv,Andrea

  1. Date: 1/15/2011 10:03:00 AM
    This is an appealing story...Got my attention and drew me in and held me..I am glad that I chose it to read this morning..You are a felicitator of happiness when you give such kind reviews of my work..Thanks..Sara

  1. Date: 1/15/2011 9:21:00 AM
    a bombardment of piercing images that capture this scene with such clarity and pathos , fabiyas! impactful.. :) nette