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Her name is Lovely part 2

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Her name is Lovely part 2

Suddenly a very soft and familiar voice spoke to her conscious saying “Lovely”
“Yes” she replied   
“Tomorrow you are coming back home”
“OK” she said breathing heavily
The conversation ended right at that instant 
Seven minutes later the unpredictable happens and Lovely dropped into a short comma.
A new day arrives.

Date: 01/01/1788
Ding dong, ding dong, sounds the door-bell
Lovely wakes up; open the golden windows the sun is raising
Knock, knock someone is at the golden door
She didn’t know what was going on this time
She walks all the way to the door not noticing that her house was made out of the finest
marble, and the finest gold that ever existed.
Lovely answers the door thinking is the mail man with the missing letter.
When she finally opens the door instead of the mail man was her husband with open arms and
a smile on his face.
Saying “welcome home baby” “I had been waiting for you”  


Diogenes Zuniga

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  1. Date: 11/7/2009 7:53:00 PM
    que historia tan linda que imaginacion tienes vale!! buenisima

  1. Date: 8/3/2009 10:28:00 AM
    Terrific! You're improving your writing! What a beauty! Keep working...and sharing. Ruben.

  1. Date: 8/2/2009 7:19:00 AM
    ow my part one was so sad and send me in tears but the second part i love it and i love the last verse----WE all going to a better place someday our real home--a gem to my favs--part i and 2---charma