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_______________________________ "This poem is not about what is written, but what is not written." Was it you who called butterflies of white diamond flight in resurrection of soul unable to find To you my poor lady whom eyes favor shown why must belief fall in rains doom Could it be in despair the naked tree weep in song o how her pastel love in silence had simply gone But, to find lovely boughs to whom her love drape must my hand reach distant for painful tear, I must take.. _______________________________ Poet ~ Rick Parise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/1/2013 9:58:00 PM
this is a nice winning poem in PD's contest. <3 SKAT <3
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Date: 6/28/2013 2:39:00 PM
Rick congratulations on this grand poem. A well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/26/2013 4:47:00 PM
Rick, , CONGRATULATIONS~ and thank you for enjoying my contest...I had much fun in closing my contest... A weeks into my poem.... contest. Take care and have yourself a lovely day.... LINDA
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Date: 6/26/2013 3:44:00 PM
congrats on your win with this fine poem Shadow x smiles
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Date: 7/8/2011 6:32:00 PM
wow, another beauty I am seeing as I go down this list (finally) A belated congratulations on your well deserved win, my friend!
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Date: 7/8/2011 6:30:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS! on this splendid art written here....*_*junjun
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Date: 7/7/2011 1:10:00 PM
Beautiful verse, Rick. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN, Lainie
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Date: 7/6/2011 6:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "The Unwritten" contest, Rick. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/6/2011 5:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "The Unwritten" contest ^Rick. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2011 3:31:00 PM
Wow...softly beautiful and so sad is this lovely entry! Love it, Rick! :)
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Date: 7/5/2011 2:42:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest, Rick
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Date: 7/5/2011 1:15:00 PM
wow, rick!… swinging cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs
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Date: 7/5/2011 12:35:00 PM
Congrats Rick on your wonderful win with this dynamic write my friend.. another awesome entry ..luv..
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Date: 7/5/2011 10:32:00 AM
Lovely write. Many congrats, Rick : )
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Date: 7/5/2011 10:21:00 AM
congrats rick great piece
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Date: 7/5/2011 10:05:00 AM
Congratulations Rick on your win in my contest with this splendid poem~~
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Date: 7/1/2011 3:28:00 PM
Congrats on another piece well written. I love the third stanza (is that what it's called) i'm sorry still very novice at this... "Could it be in despair the naked tree weep in song o how her pastel love in silence had simply gone" I love this....
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Date: 7/1/2011 7:27:00 AM
"lovely"
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Date: 6/30/2011 8:17:00 PM
very dramatic piece Rick.. just how Constance luvs them .. with depth and illusion and u have penned a mysterious one with this beautiful poetic art my friend.. u amaze me constantly luv.. truly using the God given gift so very well.. good luck in this unique contest..she does challenge us no?
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