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Heaven Sent Me Smiles

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Heaven Sent Me Smiles

Heaven sent me smiles on the wings of black crows
and I watched as they soared through the sky from which their passion flows.
They flew through the air above me and they stayed for a short while,
But still they had to go because they had already given me heaven’s smile.
Into the glowing gold and amber sky these crows started to fly
And the breath taking sight urged my lips to smile as I waved good bye.
As I gazed upon the fading black crows they showed me something so worthwhile
For it was because them I saw Heaven smile.

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  1. Date: 7/14/2010 6:53:00 PM
    That was beautiful and heart warming. Great poem

  1. Date: 7/14/2010 3:49:00 AM
    I will not looke at crows with my normal distaste again. Nice write Destinh\

  1. Date: 7/13/2010 12:06:00 PM
    enjoyed, I saw a photo with the clouds shaped like an angel and a dolphin, it was so vivid that I know it had to be manipulated by the artist but it still was cool.

  1. Date: 7/12/2010 11:50:00 AM
    Destiny, this is a lovely poem. Beautiful take on the picture. Congrats on your win in Carolyn's contest >> James

  1. Date: 7/12/2010 11:25:00 AM
    Congratulations Destiny on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Heaven Sent Smiles". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/12/2010 11:10:00 AM
    Enjoyed this poetry from you today and will read more, please check out my recent Criminals part 3 of course Fiction. Have a great day.

  1. Date: 7/12/2010 8:54:00 AM
    Congratulations on the win with this excellent write...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

  1. Date: 7/12/2010 1:54:00 AM
    This is wonderful really like this so smiles to you ,and thank you for my comments i am going to put you in my favs as i love the way you write sarah x

  1. Date: 7/12/2010 12:01:00 AM
    This sure made me smile too, Destiny, nothing like that picture to inspire smiles and you captured it well with your poem---:) Congrats on your win! :) -- Nikko :)

  1. Date: 7/11/2010 9:25:00 PM
    Congrats on the 7th place win, Destiny

  1. Date: 7/11/2010 5:36:00 PM
    Hi, Destiny. I do think you are destined to bring beauty to this world. Never stop! Thanks for your comments. Love, Iolanda

  1. Date: 7/11/2010 5:15:00 PM
    great interpretation of the picture, Destiny. Congratulations on your win. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 7/11/2010 3:37:00 PM
    Congratulations, Destiny, on your poem's success in the contest, Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 7/11/2010 3:32:00 PM
    Very nice. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 7/11/2010 12:00:00 PM
    The last two lines were amazing, Destiny. Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Love, Carolyn