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Heaven Help Me

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Heaven Help Me

May I help you, sir?
Job hunting, huh? Well, let's see
Lemme check real quick
Nope, openings
Directions? Sure! See those stairs?...

For Susan's contest
***No sacrilegious intent here!!... I'm a true believer!... I think the Lord has a good sense of humor...

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  1. Date: 12/24/2012 8:43:00 PM
    Tim, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD

  1. Date: 10/31/2012 3:04:00 PM
    revisiting this one. Crap, it's so much like my poor hubbie looking for a job right now.

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 8:18:00 AM
    very nice Tanka friend Tim..I like it (^_^) Good luck in the Contest and thanks for dropping by..Good day!!

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 10:05:00 PM
    Tim, this is just GREAT. I think Susan will really dig it for the sense of humor she has. soupmail.

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 2:41:00 PM
    you and he both, Tim, this leaves the mind in ponder mode, excellent poem....

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 12:04:00 PM
    This more true than you might realize.

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 7:39:00 AM
    I really enjoyed this extremely fun write that you have written! I think that this poem brings with it a sense of peace in some ways, and harmony! I love the way you wrote this poem, so conversational, seemingly written effortlessly, and flows so well! What a wonderful piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 3:41:00 AM
    The more you read this the better it gets. Very true. Like it.