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Night owl hoots at me again, again beneath a puff of clouds, like cozy pillow to my moon pinching my September nose to tuck my ruffled mind away… and in twilight’s dimming, a music box of rain songs frolics in slow, slow motion through whiffs of a lengthened day, cuddling hours of pure respite with scented glow of new autumn. Between fading light and duskiness I reflect if his tomorrow would float as petals are to cotton leaves glistening in tuneful drizzle of ticks; while winds brush outside the sill… and between teapot and lamp’s glow the phone rings in a hush-a-bye, chiming low, his breath droned to sigh how my face matched a star beaming, that he called to say he loved me in the dark. Compliments Contest, Frank H. by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 10/10/2013 6:48:00 AM
    Congrats for the win in the contest, nette

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 10:47:00 AM
    Nette, . Congratulations on your deserved winning poem. Perfectly complimented by your pen. Have a nice day. xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 7:18:00 AM
    Your unique way of taking us there...loved it nette...congratulations

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 12:56:00 PM
    Lovely one Nette ...Seren

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 9:14:00 PM
    Thanks for sharing, i enjoy the ride,Ivy

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  1. Date: 9/23/2013 7:55:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading this poem tonight. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 10:18:00 AM
    Just he called to say "my love", nicely worded with natural phenomena. Beauty is hidden with cool rhythm. Lovely done, my friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 9:06:00 AM
    Stunning & beautiful. The power of a voice, eh?

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 6:45:00 AM
    Plain and simple... your writings are exquisite dear Nette! Love and hugs xoxoxox

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 9:06:00 PM
    this is wonderfully romantic, Nette. A great way to do an autumn poem by adding romance.

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 8:21:00 PM
    "Like cozy pillow to my moon" wow! Nette! One of many classic lines in this beauty! Jimbo

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 7:38:00 PM
    This is such a glorious backdrop for his perfect statement of love, straight from the heart and in the dark! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a terrific and fully awe inspired piece my friend! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 3:42:00 PM
    Holy wow, this is beyond fantastic. Each stanza so mysterious, aching, tender; I freeze in your moment!

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 3:16:00 PM
    Yes, Nette....a voice in the dark can be VERY magical...charming...enticing...espcially when it carried such a powerful message....You captured this well....kudos

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 3:11:00 PM
    beautiful write here, Nette.Thanks very much - loved the picture contest. I really enjoy learning new forms