Get Your Premium Membership

He Called To Say

Night owl hoots at me again, again beneath a sheet of clouds, like cozy pillow to my moon pinching my September nose to tuck my ruffled mind away… and in twilight’s waning, a music box of a drizzle's song frolics in slow, slow motion through whiffs of a lengthened day, cuddling hours of pure respite with scented glow of new autumn. Through fading light and duskiness, I reflect how his tomorrow would float as droplets are to moistened leaves; glistening in tuneful pitter-patter of ticks as the winds brush outside the sill… and between teapot and lamp’s glow the phone rings in a hush-a-bye, chiming low, his voice drones to sigh how my face matches a star beaming, that he called to say he loved me in the rain. Types Of Love Contest Sponsor: Nayda Negron

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/10/2013 6:48:00 AM
Congrats for the win in the contest, nette
Login to Reply
Date: 10/9/2013 10:47:00 AM
Nette, . Congratulations on your deserved winning poem. Perfectly complimented by your pen. Have a nice day. xox~ LINDA
Login to Reply
Date: 10/8/2013 7:18:00 AM
Your unique way of taking us there...loved it nette...congratulations
Login to Reply
Date: 10/7/2013 12:56:00 PM
Lovely one Nette ...Seren
Login to Reply
Date: 10/4/2013 9:14:00 PM
Thanks for sharing, i enjoy the ride,Ivy
Login to Reply
Date: 9/24/2013 7:31:00 PM
A MAGICALLY BEAUTIFUL PIECE
Login to Reply
Date: 9/23/2013 7:55:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this poem tonight. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla
Login to Reply
Date: 9/23/2013 10:18:00 AM
Just he called to say "my love", nicely worded with natural phenomena. Beauty is hidden with cool rhythm. Lovely done, my friend. Loved always, bl
Login to Reply
Date: 9/23/2013 9:06:00 AM
Stunning & beautiful. The power of a voice, eh?
Login to Reply
Date: 9/23/2013 6:45:00 AM
Plain and simple... your writings are exquisite dear Nette! Love and hugs xoxoxox
Login to Reply
Date: 9/22/2013 9:06:00 PM
this is wonderfully romantic, Nette. A great way to do an autumn poem by adding romance.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/22/2013 8:21:00 PM
"Like cozy pillow to my moon" wow! Nette! One of many classic lines in this beauty! Jimbo
Login to Reply
Date: 9/22/2013 7:38:00 PM
This is such a glorious backdrop for his perfect statement of love, straight from the heart and in the dark! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a terrific and fully awe inspired piece my friend! Great Work!!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/22/2013 3:42:00 PM
Holy wow, this is beyond fantastic. Each stanza so mysterious, aching, tender; I freeze in your moment!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/22/2013 3:16:00 PM
Yes, Nette....a voice in the dark can be VERY magical...charming...enticing...espcially when it carried such a powerful message....You captured this well....kudos
Login to Reply
Date: 9/22/2013 3:11:00 PM
beautiful write here, Nette.Thanks very much - loved the picture contest. I really enjoy learning new forms
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs