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Hasty haikus

Hasty haikus

Rains outside. The two
Slink away to a corner .
Light peeps. Risky act.

Make do with cloths on.
Floundering entry, standing.
Struggling to balance.

Some one may walk in.
Thrilling, hurried like hell, though.
Come, Oh, heaven, come.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

For Sandy Ivy Davis' Nature Sexy haiku contest.

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  1. Date: 11/15/2012 2:27:00 PM
    Congratulations S.J ...Seren

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 7:03:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in SandyIvy's "Natural/Nature Sexy Haiku" contest Jag. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 12:55:00 AM
    Belated congratulations on your win friend SJ! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 5:36:00 PM
    I have a great imagination and you sure know how to tweak it! Would hate to divulge all the things that pop into my mind reading this. Neatoh Jag, I love the suspense! Love, Lizzie

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    Date: 11/15/2012 7:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 11/13/2012 4:56:00 PM
    wow, I enjoyed this little haiku tale. sexy, Jag!!! Congrats for the HM.

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 1:53:00 PM
    Jag, congratulations with your awesome sexy haiku... :-) pd

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 12:02:00 PM
    Congrats on this one..Way to go..Sara

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 6:37:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win friend Jag...have a nice day!! hugs :)

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 6:03:00 AM
    Congrats on your win Jag!Loved it!

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 1:34:00 AM
    Hey, visiting you to say CONGRATULATIONS WITH your winning poem in the contest: "Sexy Haiku" - fun contest and many good suggestions. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 1:07:00 AM
    Congratulations Jag xx

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 10:22:00 PM
    Sexy haiku. TY, Sandy'

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 5:21:00 PM
    this is sexy haiku indeed! I feel like I'm intruding upon a very intimate moment! it can either be read as three separate haikus or as one continuous piece, it works well either way :-)

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 4:07:00 PM
    Reads like a winner..I am sure that Sandy will like this one..Good luck..Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 2:55:00 PM
    wow the imagery here, is awesome...

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 7:20:00 AM
    sneaky lol,great write Jag,good luck bro

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 12:58:00 AM
    wow, simmering image, jag... best wishes!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 1:26:00 PM
    With cloths on? You owe me big time.

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 7:22:00 AM
    Your topics are soooo very wide, Jag....wotta scene!! Sandy will appreciate this one! Best of luck in the contest! gwendolen