"The harder you work, the luckier you get."
Below is the poem entitled haiku 1 which was written by poet
MacMillan. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.
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as soft as her breath
large snowflakes upon
*my first attempt at a haiku without verbs
**Yes, it is subjective and does contain metaphor :)