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Gunwale shades in the breeze

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Gunwale shades in the breeze

Gunwale shades

The breeze evoked the fading light;
opaque the molecules of air
along the brae addressed the night,
returning beasts and men to lair.

The faded words' transmitted strain,
defined on memories to last,
unable phase was to obtain
responses to their quests' recast.

Chrysanthemums that turned to shades,
perfumed the night on minds to nest,
she laughed! (His entity evades
to be night-solitude's best guest).

Bespoken vows were said to meet
inside the breeze; the seas' motif,
upon the maps, trips incomplete
became, a shoreline and a reef.

Neglected was their feast of e'er
- the passing breeze increased years' count,
He made her laugh his solemn flare,
and builder of a lone surmount.

The Sea, like mistress hence embraced
one soul of nautilus that fled 
inside the breeze while dark had graced
night's gunwale cold that hurt and bled.

Her wraith induced his soul to free,
invited dancer to death's fair;
eternal guest and cedar tree
while void in front absorbed his stare. 

© 08-24-2012, G. Venetopoulos
(Iambic tetrameter)

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  1. Date: 2/4/2014 3:49:00 PM
    Giogio: This is a joy to read and brushes on my mind like a soft breeze. You are such a master of meter. Love, SuZ

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 4/3/2014 4:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you dear Suz! Where have you been? Smiles!
  1. Date: 1/18/2014 4:40:00 AM
    hi Giorgio I am blown away such a visual impact kudos Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 1/16/2014 11:13:00 PM
    Our pasts can come back to haunt us, every now and then. Forcing us to relive the things that we regret most. This is a very haunting, yet beautiful piece of poetry, Giorgio! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!...Thank you so much for the kind and encouraging comments. :)