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gunmetal clouds

gunmetal clouds part
and sunlight streams on a hill
that holds poppy wreaths 
      the wet cenotaph now gleams
      while a vet faces its glare   

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  1. Date: 10/30/2012 2:25:00 PM
    Such vivid imagery. Congratulations on the win. Well-deserved indeed.

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 11:38:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning poem in "Sunshine" contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 9:04:00 AM
    A super eulogy to our glittering veterans! Love the contrasting, last-two lines! A splendid commemorative poem! Congratulations on a grade A, first place poem!

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 8:30:00 PM
    Cyndi, the sun comes out tomorrow..:-), CONGRATULATIONS :-) with your awesome poem in Leonora's "Tanka Crazy - Sunshine" contest. Have yourself a sweet night * Luv~PD

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 3:35:00 PM
    I stop a moment in silence and I bow to your beauty and penmanship, love always, vie

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 2:58:00 PM
    i can imagine these images--gunpowder clouds and poppy streams, cyn... love the whole scene!.. please take care; we just had a typhoon last week... ohh, i pray this mad hag turns around.. congrats with huggs!.:)

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 2:51:00 PM
    stunning imagery, cyndi. So glad to finally have seen this one. and congrats in the contest.

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 12:36:00 PM
    Beautifully done! Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 10:52:00 AM

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 9:51:00 AM
    Big congratulations Cyndi love xx

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 8:48:00 AM
    Such a moving and poignant twist to the contest theme....a wonderful tanka with such emotion! Congratulations, Cyndi!

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 8:44:00 AM
    Congratulations on your beautiful poem winning the contest. A very visual poem.

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 7:57:00 AM
    Hey a new word *cenotaph-empty tomb! Good on you sis Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 5:26:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Leonora's "Tanka Crazy-Sunshine" contest Cyndi. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 5:21:00 AM
    Congratulations Cyndi for winning 1st Place in my contest “Crazy Sunshine”. You filled me up with so much happiness while reading your splendid poem. Thank you so much for your full support . May the sun shines in your life always. Love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 3:54:00 AM
    You have penned a beautiful picture here.Love this tanka.