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Twins, taut and throbbing
That once made my heady wine
Fickle  for suckle

Twins, taut and throbbing
That once made my heady wine
Mellowed and supple

Twins, taut and throbbing
That once made my heady wine
Shriveled  to raisins.

Form: haiku (5-7-5)
11- May -13

For Alfred Vassallo's contest

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  1. Date: 5/19/2013 11:51:00 PM
    yeah! bouncing my head for a wonderful haiku like this!---Elai

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 9:14:00 AM
    Reads like a winner to me..Sara

  1. Date: 5/15/2013 5:22:00 PM
    I sense a double entendre's those 'shrivelled raisins' in the last one that worry me lol :)

  1. Date: 5/14/2013 10:01:00 AM this one, jag - Luck in contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 5/12/2013 1:40:00 PM
    love the developent of your creative thought.. a fine write, dear jag... you always awe me..:) huggs

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 11:48:00 PM
    Interesting one, Jag. Love how you made the last one shriveled raisins.

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 7:42:00 PM
    Very interesting write, Jag. Grapes and raisins both have their place. ;) I'm sure Freddie will love this.

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 10:41:00 AM
    soup mail

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 9:07:00 AM
    Good morning ;-) stopping by to enjoy the best of your poetry yet. mmmmm from throbbing and juicy grapes, = to sweet and tiny raisins... Love and all enjoyed all 3 haiku. Jag, thank you for all the nice and lovely visits in the past. After seeing and hearing the things that go on in this world, gives me reason to pray and never take my true poet friends for granted. Enjoy the greatest people and things in life. Have yourself a wonderful and lovely Mother's Day. Lots of Luv & Hugs *LINDA