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Going Through Senses


                                  free verse
                                  focus in
                                  precise Images
                Pound—like Japanese forms—“Old Pond”


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  1. Date: 8/13/2009 9:17:00 AM
    Love the expressiveness. Thanks for informing me of my win for I didn't know. Sara

  1. Date: 7/10/2009 11:15:00 AM
    Wonderful write I simply loved this piece .. regards Jayne

  1. Date: 5/25/2009 10:40:00 AM
    Golly Ruben, what a creative writer you are, i appear to be learning more and more each day on this site, James

  1. Date: 5/19/2009 9:05:00 AM
    I am initiated to learn ... and before the genius, I bow.

  1. Date: 5/18/2009 12:43:00 PM
    gosh this is a hell of a write. excellent -love and peace:james

  1. Date: 5/18/2009 10:40:00 AM
    WOW. Raw brilliance Ruben. You are such an inspiration. "I'm a Lime too", with a Reuben sand.wish, how about you? ;)

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 3:02:00 PM
    Brilliant writing, Ruben! I appreciate the introduction to this interesting verse form. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 1:35:00 PM
    Nice work Ruben, Bashô is an inspiration of mine and you did his haiku justice in this fibonacci...Raul

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 11:03:00 AM
    Thanks for your comment. I see that you really do rock! This Fibonacci is most excellent. Love, DAS-J

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 10:42:00 AM
    Ruben thanks for the insightful look at my poem..much respect brother.

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 9:07:00 AM
    You always put so much in a few words...

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 8:55:00 AM
    Awesome, Ruben. what could be better than old pond? amazing you are, and so very kind. :) love, Kristin P.S-I'm adding you to my fave poet's list. love your stuff (and you!) :)

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 7:10:00 AM
    This is incredible Ruben..I truly love this piece...the last line is out of the park..into my faves brother.

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 6:33:00 AM
    Ruben - you are so awesome! Love this! Good luck! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 5:42:00 AM
    Great writing Ruben. Its very visual as it should be. Love Christie

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 5:12:00 AM
    Excellent Fibonacci tribute poem to Mother Nature....and your title's perfect, well done Ruben! Rgds, E.

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 3:17:00 AM
    Hi,Ruben! Thanks for your suggestion and comment. Your poem describes the beauty of Nature, like Old Pond, to awaken our senses to those beautiful images. I wish you continued success with the contest. Regards, Andrew.

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 2:12:00 AM
    lets go through senses Rub,this short free verse expands in my thoughts,it takes me fly faraway to Japan when the bird flies and the frog jumps in the"Old Pond"and SPLASHHHH---i don't know why i feel The Hiss here too,maybe its just my thought,i'm focusing in precise images awesome images formed by a great poet,this goes to my favs Rub,you're a winner already for me,but good luck for the contest!Ruben---charma

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 2:07:00 AM
    Very well done Ruben. Thanks for the comment on my first Haiku. I'm not sure the "King of Haikus" is in any danger though. lol I did write a second one though. Make sure you check it out. Nate

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 12:19:00 AM
    Ruben thank you for your welcome comments glad it made your weekend a well deserved honour to a talented poet.Rgds Brian