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From the garden

The sun came to life with one soul
holding on to vision 

Yet, an added with
break of rib

rose with;
sense of touch

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  1. Date: 10/21/2011 1:19:00 PM
    awe cute. Keep writing :)

  1. Date: 9/24/2011 11:08:00 AM
    Right on James :)

  1. Date: 9/22/2011 2:40:00 PM
    I think she was a little to (touchy feely) eve'n for her own good James..anyway enjoyed today.

  1. Date: 9/21/2011 2:30:00 PM
    Did we miss a birthday--- and for both you and Noah--- in that case a Belated Happy Birthday guys. Wonderful piece you have penned James love phyl

  1. Date: 9/18/2011 11:29:00 AM
    I had to read Andrea Dietrich's comment to know what was going on. Sorry to be so thick. As usual, Sir James, you are THE one. Love, daver

  1. Date: 9/17/2011 1:25:00 AM
    cool take on the age old Garden of Eden tale, James. NIce to see you posting here anew! LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 9/16/2011 3:48:00 PM
    Wonderful write deep meanings of spiritual things and love....with love...old Jack

  1. Date: 9/16/2011 1:11:00 PM
    Beauty captured from your soul, James bring tears to my eyes...Truly a joy to read and comprehend. Have a wonderful weekend! Love, Annalise P.S. Linda hinted that it's yours and Noah's Birthday?? In that case, Happy Birthday to you both with God's choicest blessings!

  1. Date: 9/16/2011 11:56:00 AM
    oh intensity is passion James and your words invigorate the spirit being ..luv.. so happy to hear from u with precious words ..may u and Noah have the best birthdays ever the luv of the Lord who holds u precious and friend... hugs and kisses to two favorites...