Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership


Quote of the Day

Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

  |  Comment

Freaks

Charlotte Puddifoot Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Freaks which was written by poet Charlotte Puddifoot. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Charlotte Puddifoot

Best Charlotte Puddifoot Poems

+ Fav Poet

Freaks

Tented dark your shadowed nightmares lurk within neon screams vomit from vertigo rides mirrors' distortions. Strange voyeurs touch aberrant skin twisted minds gawp and girn at curious contortions souls' inner warpings.
by Charlotte Puddifoot for Nette Onclaud's 'Share A Shadorma' contest

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 8/23/2011 9:07:00 PM
    Vomit from vertigo. Ha! sounds like me when I ride something. Congratulations on your honored poem top three. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 8/23/2011 4:07:00 PM
    I'm glad this dark one got a high mark. Really deserved win. Congrats!

  1. Date: 8/23/2011 1:47:00 PM
    Congrats Charlotte on your win.. ..beautiful write.

  1. Date: 8/23/2011 12:33:00 PM
    Great work! Well written. Tony

  1. Date: 8/23/2011 10:54:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning placement. Caryl Ramsdale

  1. Date: 8/23/2011 10:03:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Share A Shadorma" contest Charlotte. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/23/2011 9:04:00 AM
    Congrats Charlotte on your terrific third place win with this elegant entry on carnival..luv..

  1. Date: 8/23/2011 9:00:00 AM
    Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of nette, Charlotte

  1. Date: 8/23/2011 3:53:00 AM
    hey Charlotte, congrats on your win, would love to see this one..... David

  1. Date: 8/22/2011 10:41:00 PM
    Aha! Someone else who saw an opportunity to write something sinister! Liked the last line especially! Congrats and cheers from Cyndi

  1. Date: 8/22/2011 9:58:00 PM
    yes indeed, Charlotte... you captured the essence of ewwwww with this one. Very, very well done! I bow.

  1. Date: 8/21/2011 10:27:00 AM
    dark very dark. john

  1. Date: 8/17/2011 11:59:00 PM
    Excellent portrayal of the dark side of the carnival. Truly some freaky stuff in them!!

  1. Date: 8/17/2011 6:58:00 PM
    wow Charlotte sounds like the fun house down the seashore where I am right now or Dracula's Castle which is so eerie .. elegant words of creativity..good luck in the contest luv..