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Below is the poem entitled Frankenstein which was written by poet Dana Smith. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Frankenstein, O' Frankenstein, your monster's rejected, and lonely. ~ How about you build a bride, to be his one and only? So Frankenstein creates one more, for his monsters' bride to be. But after he completes his work, he regrets his gift to thee. So Frankenstein then kills the bride, knowing what will come. But even then, it doesn't stop him, what he's done is done. Frankenstein, O' Frankenstein, you've broke your monsters.. heart? And due to your own monstrous ways, your wife and you shall part. So since he killed his monsters bride, his monster takes his, too. And selfish Frankie knew his fate, yet he followed through. The monster suffered time again, neglected and ignored, But karma got his master back, although no pain was cured.

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  1. Date: 1/20/2012 6:09:00 AM
    funny take on the old story....well done!!

  1. Date: 1/19/2012 6:46:00 AM
    Nice poem, it sound very aesthetic

  1. Date: 1/18/2012 9:35:00 PM
    what an interesting style this has, Dana'lynn. It's cool to see someone writing about this literary character!! Good one.

  1. Date: 1/18/2012 4:13:00 PM
    complicated incarnated, but did he still have the charm, was he rebuilt from bits n pieces, of other buggers arms?

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 7:38:00 PM
    What a beautiful way of writing this poem! Great way to convey pure simple emotions! I love it!! I really enjoyed this write a lot! Awesome Work!!

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 7:27:00 PM
    well well...very entertaining... enjoyed,..p.d.

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 6:53:00 PM
    Nice poem...enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing