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Below is the poem entitled Forsaken which was written by poet Rick Parise. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Like the crumbled paper of indecision - Epic thoughts waste away With each dying memory - I burn the soiled page A place where love had ran away - As I Peer past the rusted gate With each wall of contemplation - Forever and too late With immortal thoughts and mortal pain - A tear upon my face Clothed in a suit of aching desire - Suffocating in my fate Like the crumbled paper of indecision - Tossed and thrown away.... _________________________________

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  1. Date: 6/24/2013 6:18:00 PM
    Rick you must make a note on the bottom of the verse telling which poet & poem was your inspiration & what word, or line, or feeling was the jumping off point for your verse. THANKS!! L & L