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Below is the poem entitled FONDER OUR WALTZ which was written by poet nette onclaud. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Our giggles trill swirling on paths divine
Music of widened years carousing sweetly,
Where every joy ride is a drink of time
From which we both sip, like nights of coffee.

Secrets we keep under river's deep floor
Like mirrored glass where we color the dew,
Buddy guy, an accomplice, I adore
When dusk gushes tears; he's my first rescue.

Tempers sting, yet friendship echoes rebirth
My partner in this endless waltz called life
Listening to our dreams, fonder this earth,
As bridesmaid lifting veil of his housewife

       The music still dances within our eyes
       A treasure of love, bonding as allies.

For Howie, my best male buddy... 
I also became the godmother of his daughter.

Contest: Appreciate Platonic Relationship
Sponsor: Poet Undertaker
Poet: nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 1/16/2014 6:28:00 AM
    Written in the most beautiful words of love! Congrats nette! hugs and a soup mail too...

  1. Date: 1/14/2014 9:04:00 PM
    Enjoyed the write on Platonic relationships and congratulations on the fine win, nette

  1. Date: 1/14/2014 6:14:00 PM
    HOw great to have a best "bud" like this one, Nette. glad to see your poem finally. A well deserved win in the platonic friendship contest!

  1. Date: 1/14/2014 9:09:00 AM
    nette,a wonderful poem.Congratulations. great win.(: ) Jenish.

  1. Date: 12/28/2013 8:30:00 AM
    Thank you for stopping by and reading my poetry. The content of this verse was just what I hoped to receive ;) Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/17/2013 7:59:00 PM
    Your close friendship oozes from the page...these are rare and treasures...wonderful nette.... PS thanks for the honor you so blessed me with in your contest beauty in imperfection...I'm humbled...really...

  1. Date: 12/17/2013 5:51:00 PM
    Real friends suppose to disagree, and protect the innocence of guilt. I like this, Boo!

  1. Date: 12/17/2013 1:50:00 PM
    My congrats on your friendship and your well written poem. It is beautiful to read poems on friendship; it is actually one of the kindest forms of love. Nice write nette; many smiles and love from Athens. :) G.

  1. Date: 12/16/2013 3:47:00 PM
    Hi Nette, wonderful tribute to a warm friendship.. Ken

  1. Date: 12/16/2013 2:41:00 PM
    Some friends are so special and its nice to acknowledge them and pamper them with such melodic verse..Lovely you are.

  1. Date: 12/16/2013 1:35:00 PM
    very sweet and beautifully penned

  1. Date: 12/16/2013 1:31:00 PM
    An amazing sonnet here.Enjoyed a lot Nettie.

  1. Date: 12/16/2013 9:53:00 AM
    I want to have a female version of Howie.The tender vignettes of your poem are chiselled in gold, Nette.

  1. Date: 12/16/2013 9:47:00 AM
    The constancy of reaching out and the value of maintaining friendship make me smile. Heartwaming poem made more special by this line, " My partner in this endless waltz called life." Shows how supremely talented you are. Thank you.

  1. Date: 12/16/2013 8:39:00 AM
    Nette, you have such wonderful range in your poetry, and this is another fine example. Those poem radiates all you feel so expressively. I was warmed by its reading.

  1. Date: 12/16/2013 7:31:00 AM
    What a strong & potent sense of togetherness & friendship. This was exquisite.

  1. Date: 12/16/2013 3:26:00 AM
    Terrific isn't it to have someone like that:) Another beautiful poem from you, very well written.

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 10:26:00 PM
    This is a tremendous write about a great friend! I really enjoyed reading this lovely poem, a fantastic piece! Awesome Work!!

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 7:09:00 PM
    Very nice poem Nette. Buddy Guy was a great blues musician and singer. I gather he is not the one you are writing about. Enjoyed this read....peter

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 6:58:00 PM
    a good friend is always a blessing Nette excellent poem Shadow x smile hug