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Flesh Uniform

I`ve often told you stories
of the way I used to live
A drifter..Sometimes walking in circles
Not so bad really,always coming around again

Seeing the moon from a birds eye
Somewhere in a far away distance
The earth hangin`upside down
My dream is on the line
My work is done, even though it wasn`t on time
Drift away, let yourself go in a free fall
Climbing up and into a new life
Might just see myself on the doorstep
to a parallel existence
Do we trust who we are?
Or which way life will lead us?

Life got in the way of living
The unforgiven legend goes on
Curios about time..and how it moves to the next moment
For as long as we`re wearing our earthly coat
Its all in the hands of destiny
Forces out of reach while wearing our flesh-uniform
Every fiber in my body,every beam of light in my soul
Yearns to be with you even after my time is done..

July 29th 2012

Inspired by the spiritual activity in the blogs lately.See You Around:-)

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  1. Date: 11/1/2012 6:31:00 AM
    such sensitivity Arild, wonderful poem, glad i've seen this...

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 1:30:00 PM
    another stop to relish your deep insights, arild... may your day be bright!..:) hello and huggs!

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 8:58:00 AM
    deep penetrating words of substance Arild.. great how others words inspire us all to create anew.. wonderful expressions of inner core of beauty luv..

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 12:37:00 PM
    Wow Arild!! You got me speechless here, with this one.. So much to take in with this gem, love & hugs CTC

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 2:37:00 AM
    just in time to greet you a bright day, arild.. it's Wednesday here with some rain...:) huggs!

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 11:25:00 AM
    A wonderful sentiment and great depth of thought.

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 11:16:00 AM
    Hi Arild you are so right with this brilliant write, life seems to happen while were busy just living, all the best owen

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 8:09:00 AM
    may your day be a food one, arild.. stopping by to send huggs!..:)

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 6:32:00 PM
    very nice. i like the feeling it gives me when i read it.

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 3:09:00 PM
    What a wonderful journey you sent me on! Enjoyed very much

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 2:44:00 PM
    Very powerful poem especially at the end of it. Much enjoyed, and what a cool title!

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 6:42:00 AM
    Insightful spiritual thoughts, Arild! Love the last line, very beautiful!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 5:27:00 AM
    Your a true Poet, and a friend... Your thoughts shared throughout your poetry is inspiring and reflects the man you are.. Proud to be your friend...Michael

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 6:59:00 PM
    I feel free from the bindings of life defined by others when I read your work. Introspective, spiritual, in the moment, visual. Keep writing.

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 6:11:00 PM
    A profoundly searching write, Arild! Once a friend had given me a plaster figure, all worn with the paint flaking off... a note came with it.."there is beauty beneath chipped paint". Sort of reminds me of this write. What you were, who you are, I think this beauty and goodness has always followed you, Arild! Best wishes, enjoyed your write! Mikki

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 5:57:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your story well done, thank you Brenda : )

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 5:22:00 PM
    Just love the story of this Arild, I think I'm a drifter at times as for time well I don't believe in it, I try & live in the ''NOW'' I read Eckhart Tolle you sound very awaken great work! have a blessed day :)

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 3:37:00 PM
    glorious, soulful expressions that manage to combine the divine pining with touches of realism,arild... i am taken by your last two lines... wow!... happy sunday's best with huggs!

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    Date: 7/29/2012 3:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks dear nette:) I love that spiritual side of life!
  1. Date: 7/29/2012 11:35:00 AM
    Arild, I like this walk through time, did you know there is no human organ that assess time, we all have our own perception of time.....I like this a lot my friend...hope your weekend is ok..David

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    Date: 7/29/2012 3:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks my friend,really appreciate you stopping by!