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Fast Food Secret


                           “In and Out” burgers, loaded!

                                  The best in the west !!

                             Ask them for 'ANIMAL STYLE’ !

                                    More delicious!

                                   Not on the menu

                                        A secret!


For Gwendolyn's contest "Fast Food"
Check out In and Out Burgers Secret Menu...(and another interesting note: There is 
a Bible verse on the bottom of their soft-drink paper cups.  They have special little
inside secrets, that some folks wouldn't know)

Copyright © Carrie Richards

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  1. Date: 5/7/2011 6:58:00 AM
    Congratulations Carrie on your win in Gwendolen's contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/7/2011 2:32:00 AM
    a gooey treat, carrie... my pleasant cheers for hitting the charts! :) huggs!

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 8:49:00 PM
    GOOD ONE, and GOOD win. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 3:22:00 PM
    Carrie, I feel this is better than this contest may have indicated. This is absolutely brilliant, maybe more so than even you know. When someone needs to give an example of this type of style, this poem should be the example. I feel it is that good. Expertly done. Congrats.

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 2:38:00 PM
    Dear Carrie, this poem is so intriguing and I'm still wondering what the secret ingredients are. Congratulations on your win in Gwendolen's contest. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 1:33:00 PM
    Many congrats on your win, Carrie : )

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 12:54:00 PM
    A well deserved win, congrats on this fine Epulaeryu xx

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 12:20:00 PM
    Congrats on your win Carrie. A very nice, interesting write ...Love, gautami

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 12:00:00 PM
    Congrats Carrie on your win in the contest

  1. Date: 5/3/2011 3:23:00 AM
    we don't seem to have that here, carrie.. bu the way you described this kind of burger makes me want to fill my intestinal tank! hmm, should google this... a really sumtuous write with winning wishes to you! :) hugggs, nette

  1. Date: 4/29/2011 10:19:00 AM
    Wow, now you got me wondering what that animal style burger is! Where is this In & Out Burger? Gosh I am reading all about burgers today I am getting soo hungry!and very interesting footnote you add in here, that's so inspiring ;) & thank you for your comments, wow you are so kind to say that :D

  1. Date: 4/28/2011 11:30:00 PM
    hmmmm, i really want to know that animal secret. Please tell me!! There was a place copying them in town once and they served burgers on lettuce for people eating low carb. You picked a good one!

  1. Date: 4/28/2011 6:26:00 PM
    Ooo.. you got to tell... I'm a burger freak... good luck.. Enjoyed your poem:-) take care..p.d.

  1. Date: 4/28/2011 5:05:00 PM
    Must be a Cally burger stop//Love the scripture cups.....Good Burger Good Word//Enjoyed~God bless ~ Rick

  1. Date: 4/28/2011 4:37:00 PM
    I haven't heard of these burgers, Carrie, but you surely sparked my interest! I'm almost afraid to ask what "Animal Style" means. LOL Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn