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Falling deeper

Seems like free falling
But nothing left to land on
Distant voices calling
But there's nothing to hold on

Large social network some may envy
I can now tell you honestly
It's not about the quantity
I would rather choose to be lonely

So many options to confide
Family, buddies, acquaintances, friends
To be honest deep down inside
Not one feels and understands

Only one I've got nothing to hide
Gave my all without any defense
Who'll always be by my side
Past, present and future tense

Does no one know me anymore
When it's finally my turn to fall
Perhaps it's like that since before
Nobody expected me to break down and call

Hope and faith my only confidants
Falling deeper all alone
Just waiting without needs or wants
Fulfilling promises to atone

When promises and plans completed
The final checklist I'll  proceed on my own
If its all really been planned and decided
To start over again somewhere as an unknown

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  1. Date: 9/14/2013 7:30:00 PM
    Kenny, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem FEATURED on the soups Home Page:-). Good-Night **Linda**

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 4:40:00 PM
    Hi Kenny, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 1:36:00 AM
    Welcome to P-Soup, Kenny ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 12:41:00 AM
    Kenny, , thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@