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falling and crawling

She is crying deep beneath 
she has a secret underneath 
not knowing what to think or say 
you act as if it's all ok. 
As the days keep on going, 
she tries,and fails and falls over 
trying to get up, 
all the while knowing 
the thing is heavy what shes hauling. 
Not knowing whom to turn to, 
not knowing what to do, 
knowing she must rise to her feet, 
never burdening anyone with her feat. 
The wind is blowing, 
the leaves keep falling, 
and she is crawling. 

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  1. Date: 6/23/2012 1:25:00 PM
    A belated warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Anna. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol 06/23/2012

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 11:12:00 AM
    Hi Anna welcome to the soup, if this is an indication of whats to come I can't wait to read more, all the best Owen