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FALLEN

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FALLEN

Forgive me as I need to say,
Anything to make your day.
Letters I will freely send.
Let me hear you; be my friend
Ever knowing to adhere.
Never stop the warmth that's near.

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  1. Date: 12/3/2008 7:55:00 AM
    Beautiful write I think letters to a friend are precious, and would make anyone's day. Wonderful write! Blessings, ~Michaela~

  1. Date: 11/26/2008 11:56:00 AM
    Good to see you online. I was wondering where you have been.

  1. Date: 10/26/2008 6:47:00 AM
    Beautiful poem Astrid. It flows so well and the message is so strong in the piece.

  1. Date: 9/30/2008 4:10:00 PM
    Well if I had your address I would send you a postcard. "Make my Day" - good line

  1. Date: 9/3/2008 3:44:00 PM
    This is an excellent poem. It flows very well. I like the message and how the piece sticks with the theme. The rhyming pattern gives it a special spark. Great job! ~Joseph

  1. Date: 8/10/2008 3:18:00 PM
    Hi Astrid, I hope that you are well, great write, take care D-nyce

  1. Date: 8/4/2008 7:52:00 AM
    Oh Ivy, this is so emotional and beautiful. I must agree with Vince's comment. True friends never judge and love and accept you, the whole you. Anyone is lucky to be your friend. Love you. Stay beautiful. Hugs, Shar xoxo

  1. Date: 8/4/2008 5:39:00 AM
    Don't sell yourself short. You don't need forgiving as much as you need understanding. Those who are your friends will never judge you, only accept you as you are. God bless. Vince

  1. Date: 8/4/2008 5:35:00 AM
    Ivy, I do so hope everything is alright. Any warmth can never be stopped as friendship is much too important. What a heart you show in this write. Peace to you today and always. Michael

  1. Date: 8/3/2008 1:50:00 PM
    Very beautifully written. Friendship is so special and a thing of the soul. Love, Sara

  1. Date: 8/3/2008 1:05:00 PM
    This is so well written and filled with yearning and emotion. Well done. Regards Heidie

  1. Date: 8/3/2008 10:17:00 AM
    Hi Ivy Just beautiful hun, filled with much love for what friendship mean to ones heart. You have a wonderful spirit and it truly shows in this lovely poem. Take care, Love Light Truth Patricia

  1. Date: 8/3/2008 9:58:00 AM
    Astrid - Friends are a blessed thing and the one true choice we have in life - God Bless

  1. Date: 8/3/2008 9:54:00 AM
    I'm not sure if your intention with this one was positive or negative, but whichever it is, it is beautiful. True friends are hard to come by...lovely, Kristin XO