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Evil Web

Evil weaves its’ web
Disguised as democracy
Awaits the naïve
The too easily deceived
Until it’s too late to run
And too hopeless to stuggle

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  1. Date: 10/24/2012 3:50:00 PM
    congratulations again, Craig. I remember this fine tanka.

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 5:50:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in ~SKAT~'s "TANKA ME" contest Craig. Love, Carol

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  1. Date: 10/23/2012 7:12:00 PM
    CRAIG, congratulations with your "Tanka me this, Tanka me that, Tanka me any poem you want :-) LOL.... what a title.. Love it and enjoyed stopping by all my sisters tanka winners... good night... LUV~PD

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 3:39:00 PM
    My big congratulations on your win, Craig! hugs:)LG

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 2:48:00 PM
    A six line tanka!! : ) Congratulations on your win, Craig. I read your comment comments. Ruben

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 2:15:00 PM
    C, Congrats on your win' luv * Siddy

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 8:37:00 AM
    Good point. We in South Africa are what we call Democratic Communists.... now there is a contradiction in terms, if you ever want one. Furthermore, the poor is robbing the destitute to pay the rich. No lie :-) Love, Su

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 2:44:00 PM
    HI, Craig. I enjoy this although I know you and I differ on things politically. I happen to think a little bit of socialistic democracy is not all that bad! I'm getting so tired of seeing the rich get richer and the poor getting poorer. (anyway, it's a very fine line and a good balance is really needed).

    cornish Avatar craig cornish
    Date: 10/10/2012 3:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Andrea, I was actually referring to other countries in South America and the Middle East that say they're democracies but are certainly not. Your feelings are safe within this write.--Luv Ya
  1. Date: 10/9/2012 6:20:00 PM
    just to help hon depending on who this is for it may or may not matter..tanka was usually a love poem and you want at least the last two lines to be very personal / don't rhyme.. hmmm ex: [I feel the evil/those who think they are free/burgers eating pump jocks/ three jobs to feed the brood/baby mama's in the house] see? much more personal SUBJECTIVE..full of blood not anticeptic? XXXXOOO Light & Love

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 10/9/2012 6:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I know I didn't do a love verse but how to make yours about love?