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Eternal Witness

tree’s umbrella eye
were there wings to catch this sky….
wide blue space to fly

inspired by Rauls Haiku contest :)

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  1. Date: 10/30/2011 1:53:00 PM
    CHRISITE,, STOPPING BY TO READ YOUR HAIKU... LOL... I DID NOT KNOW YOU WHERE FROM THE SOUP... I DO SEE YOU ON FACE BOOK.... ANYWAYS... I WISH THAT SPACE WAS MINE TO FLY IN,,,, , take care and have yourself a safe and fun Halloween week,..p.d.

  1. Date: 1/9/2011 6:03:00 PM
    Hi Christine, love this beautiful Haiku. Harry

  1. Date: 12/26/2009 5:36:00 PM
    Christie~So Angelic and peaceful, so nicely done! Love Laura :)

  1. Date: 11/20/2009 7:21:00 PM
    Beautiful Haiku, Christie. Love, Lainie

  1. Date: 11/17/2009 11:08:00 AM
    I answered this before but I guess it caught on the ribs of your umbrella and floated off. It disappeared. I notice you wrote this on my birthday. Hope it won. Thanks for reading and writing. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 10/15/2009 3:35:00 AM
    Very inspiring Haiku. I love the umbrella eye and wings to catch this sky. Nicely done. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 8/20/2009 1:55:00 PM

  1. Date: 8/1/2009 8:08:00 AM
    This is just lovely, Christie....I love this metaphor, I'm floored...Love always, Sara:)

  1. Date: 7/22/2009 12:32:00 PM
    This so beautiful Christie. I wish I could fly. I'm eleven years old and my uncle said you were the prettiest writer at PS. I loved this poem. It made me feel happy. X's and O's ...Amber

  1. Date: 7/16/2009 12:06:00 AM
    Beautiful poetry Christie one for my favourites.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcom comments.

  1. Date: 7/15/2009 8:55:00 PM
    =) every line is so peace and silence C= thanks a lot for the experience =D

  1. Date: 7/14/2009 6:57:00 PM
    Hi Christie - Wonderfully done for Raul's contest. I'm just waiting on my operation date now, it really hurts to sit cause I can't bend my knee and my back just kills me - Great to hear from you I'm really rather depressed these days in many ways - I just lay in bed on my back with my leg elevated and then go to the pool in the afternoon to exercise - In the water is the only place I can - Anyhow I'm fine hon don't trip - God Bless, YF4L, mj

  1. Date: 7/13/2009 9:01:00 AM
    Ps. "Extremely Good To See 'You' By The Way!!!!!":):):):) Smile, "Bye Again" ~

  1. Date: 7/13/2009 9:00:00 AM
    Smile ~ Oh I am sorry sweet heart! Maybe in the back of my subconcious mind, I was hoping that "Your Beauty" were old enough for my old man self? But, I can see "Your Just A Baby; But A Very Beautiful Baby, Indeed!!!!!":):):):) ~ So, "Thank You," My Dearest Lady!!!! And, I shall see "Your Beauty, On The Blessed Day of July 15th!!!!!":):):):) Smile, "My Most Talented & Beautiful Moonchild, John!!!!!":):):):) Smile, "Bye" ~

  1. Date: 7/13/2009 12:00:00 AM
    Christie thank you for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 7/12/2009 1:14:00 AM
    Best wihes with this one Christie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 7/11/2009 7:31:00 PM
    I really like this poem! It is creative!! Great job!

  1. Date: 7/11/2009 11:36:00 AM
    Thanks for your support in my contest...Raul

  1. Date: 7/9/2009 11:01:00 AM
    great visualizations christie, good luck in the contest..........Abe

  1. Date: 7/8/2009 6:59:00 PM
    I can just see you soaring into a crisp blue sky, at times your eyes are closed and you are in perfect harmony