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Estranged

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Estranged

So has our world become
Captivated are our souls
Immersed in a yearn for a material diversion
Our heart hungers for spiritual nutrition
Time flies,floates away like a coarse river
There was a time when we were the masters of our time
Think of all we got
We might not even know we have it
Throbbing heartbeat
A constant reminder that our clock is ticking

We try to sit in more than one chair
Even tries to eat ourselves more than full
Estranged we have become
We do not control our own time anymore
Nor our lifes
Trusting that our material prosperity makes us happy
I wonder which day we wake up
And realizes..,we have fooled ourselves
Or maybe we already did
it just passed us right by


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  1. Date: 7/6/2013 10:41:00 PM
    :-) enjoying your Featured Poem of the week. take care and have yourself a great coming week. xox~ LINDA"

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 10:09:00 AM
    HI ARLID, Congratulations on your Featured Poem of the week. have a nice 4th of July. *SKAT

  1. Date: 5/16/2012 1:00:00 PM
    Wow, this is a powerful and thought provoking write Arild, I especially love how you ended it.. Hope your week's been a good one thus far ;) love & hugs CTC

  1. Date: 1/29/2012 8:21:00 PM
    Great read ! Very true.

  1. Date: 1/9/2012 11:22:00 AM
    digging ur old poems...they are gold Erild...some very wonderful thoughts here...we all shud strive to learn...A constant reminder that our clock is ticking This is so true...cheers !

  1. Date: 1/6/2012 3:47:00 PM
    For some reason I was drawn to this poem by its title. Now I'm really glad I read it. Thank you also for the kind comment on my poem! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 12/24/2011 12:05:00 PM
    a very good serious poem. makes me think

  1. Date: 12/16/2011 5:05:00 AM
    excellent and so profound, and so very true every word you write. enjoyed this Arid. harry

  1. Date: 12/14/2011 6:09:00 PM
    Deep thoughts, Arild. Estranged is the perfect description for what so many of us are in these modern days. We are estranged from the universe!

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    Date: 12/15/2011 11:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks for stopping by Andrea..:) I always appreciate your comments. And be nice to Jimmy.,Ok? Happy Holidays
  1. Date: 12/14/2011 5:18:00 PM
    thanks for stopping by..Nicely done hope to share more with you in the up coming year.. cory