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Empyreal Ecstasy

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Empyreal Ecstasy

At the Rio Grande gorge
A high desert camping spot
Sleeping soundly on my back
On a canvas camper cot

Nature's bidding wakens me
Then I know that I must rise
In chilly desert darkness
So I split my sleepy eyes

Horizon to horizon
The resplendent Milky Way!
Transcendental radiance
And it steals my breath away

Mother Earth embraces me
I see Father Sky above
A trinity of unity
An eternity of love

Hesitant to break the spell
Minutes motionless I lie
In this enchanted moment
I could be content to die...

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  1. Date: 11/16/2014 5:29:00 PM
    Those moments, however fleeting, do renew and energize us. Congratulations on your placement int he contest.

  1. Date: 11/10/2014 5:31:00 AM
    anybody would be ready to die for enchanted moments of solitude. congrats.

  1. Date: 11/10/2014 2:35:00 AM
    wow! this is enchanting, Roy! your words and its flow drifted me off to dreamland and indeed it was ecstatic. loved the last stanza! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 11/9/2014 5:14:00 PM
    Congrats Roy, I love this an especially love the ending ..we should be so lucky to die in a state of bliss. BG

  1. Date: 11/9/2014 4:10:00 PM
    wonderful imagery Roy many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

  1. Date: 11/7/2014 11:40:00 PM
    I've finally judged the "Solitude" poetry competition. While I wait for Soup to post the winners list, I am catching up with a few entrants and letting them know how they went. Roy, you take us to a beautiful place in this poem. A very enjoyable read, though the last line still catches me a little. I placed this poem 6th in the competition, well done.

    Jerden Avatar Roy Jerden
    Date: 11/9/2014 3:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey, Scott. Your contest status shows as Judged, but not Finalized. If you want the results to be posted, you have to complete the "Finalize Contest" and "Finished Judging Contest on this Date" fields on the contest form in My Poetry Contest Administration. Cheers, Roy
  1. Date: 1/25/2014 12:37:00 AM
    I had such an experience myself one middle of the night, driving in southeastern Oregon. It was April, but being about 3 AM, the Milky Way arced directly overhead. Supernal wonder, and I finally comprehended the galaxy. Please see my poem "No Words" for the description.

    Peterson Avatar Mark Peterson
    Date: 1/25/2014 12:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Your poems and you as a poet are now in favorites. Thanks for sharing. Wish we could chat over lunch.
  1. Date: 12/17/2013 7:28:00 PM
    Hello Roy, I do hope you find my contest.. I re-opened it for you.. I'm sorry it closed too early. I do hope you stop by and submit an entry for me. I will leave the contest up, and close it tomorrow night... LINDA

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 9:39:00 PM
    I enjoyed every word Roy. Reminded me of my fathers RAF motto Par Adva Astra. Through hardship to the Stars.

  1. Date: 5/26/2013 7:24:00 AM
    Oh, to look on nature and see this rare beauty!! Stunning piece and a well deserved win. Congrats, Roy!!

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 7:21:00 PM
    You painted a wondrous scene with words. Congratulations on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 1:54:00 PM
    Roy... xool winning poem... PD

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 9:55:00 PM
    Charming! "Crack my cranky eyes"! That was a hoot!

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 5:51:00 PM
    I just listened to the wonderful youtube recording........such a great poem this is, Roy!!! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 5/12/2013 12:18:00 PM
    You have cleverly painted your words to mesmerizing painting a star studded sky in a desert. Very beautiful. Thanks for taking us too manel

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 4:45:00 PM
    You had me from "On a canvas camper cot" Sheer talent...thanks for posting

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 2:16:00 PM
    Awww, beautifully worded. You had me right there with you in the desert. Lovely writing, Roy. :)

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 11:45:00 PM
    Sounds like bliss there, lovely words Roy....Seren