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Ellip Playground

slippery...downhill ride...playground slide

climbing boys...monkey bars...broken bones

seesaw goes...high and low...don't jump off

Feb. 25, 2013 for Gigno's Ellip Contest

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  1. Date: 3/7/2013 1:20:00 PM
    Craig belated congrats on your win...David

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 8:15:00 AM
    Now this takes me back in time.... loved playing on the playground !! Congrats on your HM in the contest !! Delightful read !!

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 5:47:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win! Lori

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 2:03:00 AM
    Congrats on your HM Craig, I am envious of all those that tried this and placed, not envious of the broken bones though xx

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 11:51:00 AM
    Congratulations on a very fine win, Craig. Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 10:13:00 AM
    Craig, this is a very nice and awesome win... always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 7:15:00 AM
    Craig congrats. Connie

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 10:00:00 PM
    Warmest congrats on this super win Craig

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 8:40:00 PM

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 1:31:00 PM
    ...I jumped off...ha. and by the way...the Old River story---100% true. We had to swim out and get the boat after the coon finally jumped out

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 8:23:00 AM
    What a picture! Sometimes shorter poems can attain a level of thought that larger ones are incapable of, and this one has done that in my mind. The unspoken is as powerful as the printed word.

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 7:09:00 AM
    Craig, very nice poem for the contest, best of luck, constance

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 10:01:00 PM
    LIke this one..should do very well. BG

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 7:36:00 PM
    Nice write for heh contest Craig xxx

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 7:23:00 PM
    Craig a wonderful write. Best to you in the contest, I enjoyed the read~Caryl

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 5:42:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading your poem... Eloquently brilliant!

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 3:03:00 PM
    what an awesome way to do your entry. I really like how you did yours, Craig. makes me wish I'd thought of it.

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 2:41:00 PM
    Another one just as perfect as the last one....great job :-)

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 2:11:00 PM
    That sounds just right to me. Boys, monkey bars, and broke bones. I held my breath when my son was young. Best wishes in the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie.

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 12:43:00 PM
    Not only is the poem fantastic...but you caught me by the TITLE..a sure giveaway from a fun-loving time! :) Good one!