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Dying Eyes

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Dying Eyes

I have lost the will to change
Taking the path that leads to nowhere
The darkness is taking over
something i cannot repair 
If it is to be broken
Drowning in the sorrow
I cannot give in
Take the fall and run to the heavens
Im never going to bow
Im never going to break
I will not fall
I will not fade
I was made to take your breathe away
Whenever my hope is lost
Thats my chance to run for cover
Light the fuse and burn it up
I dont want to change the world
I just want to make it colder
Watching the end
With our dying eyes
Tell me where forever lies

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  1. Date: 1/21/2015 12:03:00 PM
    Sounds like the song, "I will not bow", by Breaking Benjamin. Is this where you got your inspiration? Overall a good write, keep up the good work.

  1. Date: 11/15/2014 6:37:00 PM
    Why this infatuation with death? Suicide is such a final death wish.