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Drifting Clouds

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Drifting Clouds

She always loved to dance 
In the gentle showers and breeze 
Along the flowers and leaves. 

She longed to reach for the clouds, 
Dance and sing with the birds 
To please the shining stars.

As wished, she flew high 
With the wings of dance, leaving behind 
Her kith and kin, below on ground. 

She reached the clouds, 
Earned money, name and fame.
Also hired many to serve and care.

As the clouds dried and drifted, 
She lost her hold and fell on ground.
With pain and tears she looked all around,
But to love and care, none she found.

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  1. Date: 1/27/2012 1:21:00 AM
    SURESH, CONGRATULATIONS with your wonderful win * hugs ;-)~p.d

  1. Date: 1/23/2012 6:53:00 PM
    congrats Suresh on a fantastic win for this brilliant beauty poetry luv.,

  1. Date: 1/23/2012 2:41:00 PM
    I was danceing with her in the flowers, in the wind touching clouds....and then we fell, so sad...but an extremly lovely poem. Congrats on your win !!

  1. Date: 1/23/2012 1:08:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in Brian's latest contest Suresh. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/24/2009 7:02:00 PM
    Very lovely, but sad poem! Hopefulley a writers fiction, but that is hard to believe when these words seem to write themselves through your gifted soul! Hang in there! It gets worse before it gets better! Much love to you and your loved ones, Catherine:)

  1. Date: 3/24/2009 6:37:00 PM
    Very deep and sad write, Just remember God Loves you and you're never alone...I know what it feels like to have bad days, I have them it seems more than the good but it will not always be like that.. When you feel you have no one to lean on or trust in..Trust in him and he will see you through...Stay strong and keep your head up high..I pray that better days are coming for you and me..GB, always Tyesha